Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng hơi dài và có một vài lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và chọn từ (ví dụ: "memorable moment" nên là "memorable moments", "Wallpapers" không cần viết hoa). Nên có câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: một vài ví dụ về những nơi bạn chụp hoặc cảm xúc khi chụp). Dùng liên từ hợp lý để tránh câu quá dài.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. I especially enjoy capturing sunrises and sunsets because the colours are often stunning and peaceful. For example, I often photograph the sunrise at the beach near my home and use my favourite shots as my phone wallpaper or social media avatar.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn và sửa từ không phù hợp ("cause" -> "because", "poeticness" -> "a poetic quality" hoặc "a sense of poetry"). Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, kèm theo một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn để tăng tính thuyết phục.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views equally because each has its own charm. City scenes feel modern and full of life, with interesting architecture and busy streets, while countryside landscapes offer peace and a sense of poetry, such as quiet rice fields at dawn.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc ngắn gọn và có một vài lỗi ngữ pháp/chọn từ (ví dụ: "more into Vietnamese sceneries" -> "I prefer Vietnamese scenery", "a numerous kinds" -> "numerous kinds" hoặc better "a wide variety"). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, giải thích lý do ngắn gọn, và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về một địa điểm tại Việt Nam bạn thích.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't travelled much abroad and Vietnam offers a wide variety of beautiful scenery. For example, I love Ha Long Bay for its magnificent limestone islands and Sapa for its poetic terraced fields.

× I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially beautiful landscapes or memorable moment of the day like sunrise or sunset, and I use these photos as my phone Wallpapers or my Facebook or Instagram avatar.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially beautiful landscapes or memorable moments of the day like sunrise or sunset, and I use these photos as my phone wallpaper or as my Facebook or Instagram avatar.

The word 'moment' should be plural 'moments' to match 'beautiful landscapes' and the general plural context (singular and plural agreement). 'Wallpapers' should be 'wallpaper' when referring to the phone background as a general uncountable concept; using singular is more natural. Also add 'as' before 'my Facebook or Instagram avatar' for parallel structure. Suggestion: make nouns agree in number and keep parallel structure by using 'moments' and 'as my phone wallpaper or as my Facebook or Instagram avatar.'

× Actually I like both equally cause views in cities are modern and bustling.

✓ Actually, I like both equally because views in cities are modern and bustling.

The colloquial 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech/writing. Also add a comma after 'Actually' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'because' for cause explanations and include commas where appropriate.

× However views in countryside remind me of peacefulness and poeticness.

✓ However, views in the countryside remind me of peacefulness and a poetic atmosphere.

'Countryside' normally requires the definite article 'the' when speaking generally about rural areas ('the countryside'). 'Poeticness' is not natural; use 'a poetic atmosphere' or 'poetic quality.' Also add a comma after 'However' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the countryside' and prefer natural noun phrases like 'a poetic atmosphere.'

× Honestly, I haven't had the opportunity to travel to different countries around the world, so I'd say more into Vietnamese sceneries.

✓ Honestly, I haven't had the opportunity to travel to many countries around the world, so I'd say I'm more into Vietnamese scenery.

'Different countries around the world' is redundant; 'many countries' is clearer. 'More into' needs a subject and 'sceneries' is uncountable; use 'scenery.' Also adjust to present continuous preference 'I'm more into' for natural expression. Suggestion: say 'I'm more into Vietnamese scenery' or 'I prefer Vietnamese scenery.'

× I've known and believed that Vietnam has a numerous kinds of views from scenic, poetic to magnificent views.

✓ I've known and believed that Vietnam has numerous kinds of views, from scenic and poetic to magnificent.

'a numerous kinds' is ungrammatical; use 'numerous kinds' (no 'a'). Avoid repeating 'views' at the end; it's redundant. Use parallel adjectives 'scenic and poetic' and finish with 'to magnificent.' Suggestion: write 'Vietnam has numerous kinds of views, from scenic and poetic to magnificent.'