Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: correct grammar, avoid unclear words (e.g., 'worried' is wrong), and keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with linking words. Also use accurate vocabulary for feelings (e.g., 'moved', 'emotional', 'immersed').

Ejemplo: I don't usually take photos of views; I prefer experiencing them in person because it feels more immersive and emotional. For example, when I watch planes at sunset, the colours and the atmosphere are so striking that a photo can't capture the feeling. Therefore I often just watch and remember the moment.

Sugerencia: Improve coherence and grammar: use a clear topic sentence stating preference (or balanced view), then support with linked reasons using linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'however'). Fix sentence fragments and collocations (say 'city skyline, historical landmarks', 'peaceful surroundings'). Keep to 3–4 sentences max.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views for different reasons. In the city, the skyline, historical landmarks and museums are stimulating and offer many cultural events to attend. However, the countryside provides peaceful surroundings and natural scenery for relaxation. So I choose depending on my mood.

Sugerencia: Be grammatically correct and complete your thoughts: fix subject-verb agreement ('let me' → 'lets me' or 'allows me to'), singular/plural ('countries'→'country'), and finish examples. Use linking words ('for instance', 'also') and give specific, complete examples. Limit to 3–4 sentences and avoid trailing fragments.

Ejemplo: I prefer visiting other countries because I already know my home country well and want new experiences. Traveling abroad allows me to learn about different cultures and try local foods. For instance, I enjoy sampling street food in Thailand, and I also like visiting historical sites in Europe to learn about their history.

× I prefer to see things with my own eyes because experiencing them directly feel more worried and emotional.

✓ I prefer to see things with my own eyes because experiencing them directly feels more moving and emotional.

The verb 'feel' must agree with the gerund subject 'experiencing' (singular), so use 'feels' (subject-verb agreement). Additionally, 'more worried' is incorrect for the subject experiencing emotions; 'moving' or 'more emotionally affecting' convey the intended meaning. Suggest using 'feels more moving and emotional' to make the sentence natural. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8

× For example, when I watch aircraft at sunset, the atmosphere is so powerful that no photo can capture it fully.

✓ For example, when I watch aircraft at sunset, the atmosphere is so powerful that no photo can fully capture it.

Sentence is mostly correct but adverb placement is better before the main verb 'capture' for natural English: 'can fully capture' rather than 'capture it fully'. This improves fluency and follows normal adverb placement rules. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× I prefer both for different reasons I like the city because the skyline's historical landmarks, museums and cultural festivals are stimulating.

✓ I prefer both for different reasons. I like the city because its skyline, historical landmarks, museums, and cultural festivals are stimulating.

Two independent clauses run together without proper separation; add a period or conjunction. Also possessive 'the skyline's historical landmarks' is awkward; use 'its skyline' and list items with commas for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× They offer reality at many events to attend.

✓ They offer many real experiences and events to attend.

The original phrase 'offer reality at many events to attend' uses incorrect prepositions and word order. 'Offer many real experiences and events to attend' or 'offer many events to attend' conveys the intended meaning clearly. Change prepositions and noun order accordingly. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× On the other hand, the countryside offers peaceful surrounding and.

✓ On the other hand, the countryside offers peaceful surroundings.

'Surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings' when referring to the environment. The trailing 'and.' is incomplete and should be removed. Use correct plural noun form. Grammar Problem Type ID: 14

× I prefer visiting other countries rather than staying in my own countries because I was born here and already know it well.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries rather than staying in my own country because I was born here and already know it well.

Use singular 'country' when referring to 'my own country.' Using 'countries' is inconsistent with 'own' and the singular pronoun 'it' later in the sentence. Ensure pronoun and noun number agree. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× Traveling abroad let me experience different culture and try local food.

✓ Traveling abroad lets me experience different cultures and try local food.

The verb 'let' must agree with the singular subject 'Traveling abroad' (gerund phrase), so use 'lets'. Also 'culture' should be plural 'cultures' when speaking generally about different places. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun number. Grammar Problem Type ID: 4

× For example, I love eating street food in Thailand. Other visit historical sites in Europe which give.

✓ For example, I love eating street food in Thailand. I also visit historical sites in Europe which are fascinating.

'Other visit' is ungrammatical; use 'I also visit' to form a complete clause. The clause 'which give' is incomplete and needs an object or adjective; replace with 'which are fascinating' or specify what they give (e.g., 'which give insight into history'). Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb and complete relative clauses. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26