Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with grammar and redundancy. Give a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words. For example, fix verb forms (“I love taking photos”), remove duplicate words, and add a brief reason and an example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they help me remember my travels. For example, I often photograph mountains and city skylines and later share the best shots on Instagram to show friends what I experienced.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear and concise main idea, use correct subject-verb agreement, and organize supporting details with linking words. Specify a couple of concrete reasons rather than listing vaguely. Avoid filler phrases and finish the sentence cleanly.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer convenient facilities and transport links. For example, there are hospitals, places of worship, and frequent trains and buses, which makes travel and daily life much easier.

Sugerencia: Make your main point explicit and use clear reasons with examples. Correct pronoun and grammar errors and avoid unclear phrases. State one or two specific reasons (familiarity, culture, convenience) and give an example to support the opinion.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more familiar and comfortable there. For instance, I know the language and local customs, and I can easily visit family and familiar places, which makes sightseeing more enjoyable.

× Of course I love to taking pictures of different views because it's it's collected the memories of travelling to novel places and it I love to share the pictures on social media, so that's why I liking.

✓ Of course I love taking pictures of different views because they collect the memories of travelling to new places, and I love to share the pictures on social media, so that's why I like it.

Errors: incorrect use of verb + -ing after 'love' (should be 'love taking' or 'love to take'), incorrect passive phrasing 'it's it's collected the memories' and wrong subject agreement, awkward pronoun/reference and 'liking' used incorrectly. Suggestions: Use 'love taking' or 'love to take' after 'love'; change 'it's it's collected the memories' to 'they collect the memories' to refer to pictures (plural); use 'new' instead of 'novel' for natural phrasing; replace 'so that's why I liking' with 'so that's why I like it'. Ensure subject-verb agreement (pictures -> collect) and correct verb forms.

× Absolutely, of course I prefer to be in urban areas because it provide the essential amount is such as the hospital, gurdwara, church, temple and another one and it is well connected via railway lines and roads. So that and it.

✓ Absolutely, of course I prefer to be in urban areas because they provide essential services such as hospitals, gurdwaras, churches and temples, and they are well connected by railway lines and roads.

Errors: 'provide the essential amount is such as' is ungrammatical and uses incorrect quantifier/phrase; singular/plural mismatches ('it provide' should match plural 'areas'); vague 'another one' and fragmented ending. Suggestions: Use 'provide essential services' to express the idea clearly, make nouns plural to agree with 'areas' ('hospitals, gurdwaras'), and use 'they are well connected by' for correct subject-verb agreement and preposition choice.

× Personally, I prefer you in my own country because it is connected by me, he my by me and I spend more time in my country and I grew up in my country. It is also provide many facilities and.

✓ Personally, I prefer to stay in my own country because I am familiar with it, I spend more time here and I grew up here. It also provides many facilities.

Errors: Incorrect pronoun 'you' instead of 'to stay' or 'to be', nonsense phrases 'it is connected by me, he my by me' and incorrect subject-verb agreement 'It is also provide'. Suggestions: Use 'prefer to stay in my own country' or 'prefer being in my own country'; express familiarity with 'I am familiar with it'; replace 'spend more time in my country' with 'I spend more time here'; correct verb agreement 'it provides'. Remove fragments and unclear words.