Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and hesitations, and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct small grammar errors (e.g., “when I come back home” and singular/plural like “these views”). Aim for 2–3 sentences and natural phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of views because they help me remember special moments when I return home. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside sunsets so I can revisit those memories later.

Sugerencia: Improve coherence and grammar: answer directly (urban, rural, or both) and give 1–2 clear reasons with linking words (for example, because, while). Remove fillers and repetitions. Use correct grammar (e.g., “different sceneries” or better “different scenery”/“scenery”). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views because they offer different experiences: urban areas have impressive skyscrapers and lively streets, while rural areas have peaceful landscapes and nature. Because of that variety, I like photographing both.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more fluent and specific: give a direct topic sentence (I prefer views from different countries) and add a specific reason and an example. Remove hesitations and general words like “every.” Use linking words (because, for example) and correct collocations (different cultures and lifestyles).

Ejemplo: I prefer views from different countries because different cultures and lifestyles create unique scenes. For example, I enjoy the colorful street markets in Thailand and the historic architecture in Italy, which are very different from what I see at home.

× Yes, I really like doing this kind of thing because it helps me record the different memories of different places when I come back to home.

✓ Yes, I really like doing this kind of thing because it helps me record the different memories of different places when I come back home.

Incorrect use of the preposition 'to' before 'home'. In English we usually say 'come back home' or 'come home' without 'to'. Suggestion: remove 'to' so the phrase reads 'come back home'.

× I can, I can I? I can enjoy this view views again with these photos.

✓ I can enjoy these views again with these photos.

The original contains repetition and an unclear fragment ('I can, I can I?') and mixes singular and plural ('this view views'). Simplify to a clear sentence: subject + modal + verb + object. Use plural 'these views' to match 'photos'.

× I actually enjoy both because different scenery are in different places.

✓ I actually enjoy both because different scenery is found in different places.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and takes singular agreement, so 'are' is incorrect. Also 'in different places' needs a verb; use 'is found' or 'exists' to make the clause grammatical. Suggestion: use singular verb 'is' and add 'found' for clarity.

× They have their own in different, uh, specific characters.

✓ They each have their own specific characteristics.

The phrase is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Characters' should be 'characteristics' and word order should be 'own specific characteristics'. 'They each have' clarifies the subject. Remove filler words like 'uh' for clarity.

× I like the convenience. Uh, I, I like this, uh, the, the high buildings of the, uh, urban.

✓ I like the convenience and the tall buildings in urban areas.

The original is disfluent with repeated fillers and articles. 'High buildings' is better as 'tall buildings'; 'of the urban' is incorrect—use 'in urban areas'. Combine related ideas with 'and' for smoother flow and remove filler sounds.

× I enjoy, uh, the, the views in different countries, not only a specific country, because different culture and different lifestyle, umm, make every country's view so different and special.

✓ I enjoy the views in different countries, not just a specific country, because different cultures and different lifestyles make each country's scenery unique and special.

Several article and noun-number errors: 'different culture' and 'different lifestyle' should be plural ('cultures', 'lifestyles') when referring generally. 'Not only a specific country' is awkward; 'not just a specific country' is more natural. 'Make every country's view' is better as 'make each country's scenery' for clarity and collocation. Remove fillers.

× So I really like every.

✓ So I really like them all.

The sentence 'I really like every' is incomplete; 'every' needs a noun or should be replaced by 'them all' to refer back to 'views' or 'countries'. Use 'them all' for a natural, complete sentence.