Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 句子不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误。回答应该直接给出观点并用一至两句具体解释或例子来支持。建议用更自然的表达，注意时态、词序和可数/不可数名词的使用，避免重复（例如不要说 “remember our memorize”）。可以把答案控制在3-4个句子内，并使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来增加逻辑性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember beautiful places. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes to look back on later. It has become one of my favorite hobbies.

Sugerencia: 表达模糊且语法不准确。应首先直接回答问题，然后用一至两句说明原因或举例。建议用更地道的短语表达情绪影响偏好，例如 "It depends on my mood"，并给出原因说明为什么某时更喜欢乡村或城市。保持句子简洁，使用连接词如 "because" 或 "sometimes"。

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and architecture, but at the moment I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and full of natural scenery.

Sugerencia: 答案重复且含糊，词汇使用不当（如 “psychy” 不正确）。应先直接回答问题，然后解释原因并给出具体比较。注意语法（冠词、单复数）并使用正确词汇如 "inspire me" 或 "make me feel peaceful"。尽量避免重复前一问题的表述，提供与国别差异相关的具体细节。

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference—I like views both in my country and abroad. Domestic landscapes are familiar and comforting, while views in other countries can be exciting and offer new perspectives that inspire me.

× Yes I like I think the pictures of different views can remember our memorize our beauty and maybe it's a hobby with me.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos. I think pictures of different views can help us remember their beauty, and maybe photography is a hobby of mine.

这个句子结构混乱，有多重问题：重复表达（"remember our memorize our"）、措辞不当（"can remember our beauty" 应改为 "help us remember their beauty"）、不自然的短语（"a hobby with me" 应为 "a hobby of mine"）。建议将句子分成两句或更多，使用正确的词组和所有格结构，使意思清晰。

× Go to my mood or emotion.

✓ It depends on my mood or feelings.

原句不符合英语的常用表达，缺乏谓语结构。应使用常见搭配 "depend on" 并用复数形式的感情词或更自然的 "feelings"。建议使用完整短语以表达依赖情绪做决定的意思。

× In the different moment, my decision is different.

✓ At different moments, my decision is different.

使用介词和时间表达不自然，"In the different moment" 应为 "At different moments" 或者 "At different times"。此外，时态用现在一般时表示习惯性或反复发生的情况是可以的。建议使用常见时间短语并保持主谓一致。

× Maybe now I like rural areas.

✓ Maybe now I prefer rural areas.

这里表达偏好应该用动词 "prefer" 而不是一般动词 "like"，尤其在回答关于偏好的问题时。"Maybe now I prefer rural areas." 更自然。

× I think this answer is same as 0 last one on three because I think views are a different in country or in other countries.

✓ I think this answer is the same as the last one because views differ between my country and other countries.

原句语序混乱且包含无意义片段（"0 last one on three"）。需要删除多余部分并使用正确的比较表达："views differ between..." 或 "views are different in..."。建议简化句子，明确比较对象。

× But they all beautiful and made me psychy or peacefully.

✓ But they are all beautiful and make me feel peaceful or excited.

缺少系动词 "are"，形容词用法也有问题（"made me psychy" 不正确且拼写错误，"psychy" 不是常用词），应使用动词短语 "make me feel..."。并把并列情绪用更自然的词，如 "peaceful" 或 "excited"。建议使用 "make me feel + 形容词" 的结构来表达带来情绪的意思。