Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Main strengths: clear positive response and relevant example. Issues: several grammar mistakes, repetition, and an incomplete sentence. To improve, make one concise topic sentence, correct verb forms, remove repetition, and use a linking phrase to add the example. Aim for 2–3 well-formed sentences with specific detail (what kinds of views, and one reason).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing places I haven't visited before because new locations often have unique scenes. For example, when I travel I take many landscape and street photos to remember the trip.

Sugerencia: Main strengths: attempts to state a preference and a reason. Issues: word choice errors (“perform” incorrect), incomplete thought, vague explanation. To improve, state your preference directly, use correct verbs, and give a specific supporting detail or example linked with a connector (e.g., because, since).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I like the natural scenery and traditional architecture. For instance, small villages often have charming wooden houses and quiet fields that look very picturesque.

Sugerencia: Main strengths: clear pride and specific mention of variety in your country. Issues: slight awkward phrasing and redundancy (unusual and unique), and a run-on structure. To improve, give a direct answer (I prefer views in my country or both), simplify wording, and add one concrete example of a region or type of view to support your claim.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Russia is vast and diverse. For example, I enjoy the dramatic mountains in the Caucasus and the colorful wooden churches in northern villages, which are hard to find elsewhere.

× Yes I do, especially I live taking pictures in the places in places where I haven't been before.

✓ Yes I do, especially I love taking pictures in places where I haven't been before.

The student used 'live taking' which is incorrect. This is an error with verb + -ing form and word choice. 'Love taking' correctly uses a verb plus -ing to express enjoyment. Also remove the repeated phrase 'in the places in places' and use 'places' for conciseness. Suggestion: use verbs of like/love/enjoy followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), e.g., 'I enjoy taking pictures'.

× For example, when I travel I try to take a lot of pictures and make my. Journey unforgettable.

✓ For example, when I travel I try to take a lot of pictures and make my journey unforgettable.

The original has an erroneous period splitting 'my Journey' and an unnecessary capital letter. This is a sentence structure/punctuation error. Remove the period and lowercase 'journey' to form a single coherent clause. Suggestion: keep related words together and check punctuation so clauses are not broken incorrectly.

× I think I perform views of rural areas because I enjoy seeing how people can make beautiful and unique.

✓ I think I prefer views of rural areas because I enjoy seeing how people can make beautiful and unique landscapes.

'Perform views' is incorrect word choice; 'prefer' fits the question. Also 'beautiful and unique' is incomplete as it lacks a noun to modify. This is a verb choice and sentence structure error. Add a suitable noun such as 'landscapes' or 'scenery'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' to indicate preference and ensure adjectives modify a noun.

× I'm living in Russia and my country is really big and there are a lot of different places with unusual and unique views, and I value this really much.

✓ I live in Russia, and my country is really big; there are many different places with unusual and unique views, and I value this very much.

Use simple present 'I live' rather than present continuous 'I'm living' for a permanent situation. 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' is better here. 'Really much' is unidiomatic; use 'very much'. This concerns present tense use and word choice. Suggestion: use simple present for lasting states and prefer 'very much' to express degree, and choose 'many' with countable 'places'.