Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên nói câu trả lời rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và sửa ngữ pháp. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (ví dụ: “Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views.”), tiếp theo dùng 1–2 câu bổ sung nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: ghi nhớ cảm xúc, chi tiết cảnh vật) và dùng từ nối hợp lý. Tránh tiếng ấp úng và câu bị bỏ dở. Cố gắng dùng từ vựng chính xác (landscape, scenery, capture, freeze a moment) và giữ tối đa 4 câu đầy đủ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like capturing natural landscapes because a photo can freeze a special moment and bring back the feelings I had then. For example, a sunset picture always reminds me of calm and warmth.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ ràng với từ nối. Hãy bỏ tiếng ấp úng và sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự hợp lý: chủ đề, lý do cho mỗi lựa chọn, một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng từ vựng chính xác (peaceful, bustling, prefer, sometimes) và tránh câu quá dài hoặc lặp ý.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I want peace and quiet, I prefer rural areas because the scenery is calmer and less crowded. However, if I want energy and variety, I choose urban areas for their busy streets and interesting architecture.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên mở đầu bằng câu trực tiếp (I prefer...), sửa ngữ pháp (use singular/plural, correct verb forms) và làm rõ lý do bằng 1–2 câu cụ thể. Nên dùng từ vựng thích hợp (prefer, familiar, cultural differences, explore) và tránh lặp từ. Nêu một ví dụ ngắn về trải nghiệm khi đi nước ngoài so với trong nước.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy exploring different cultures and landscapes. For instance, traveling abroad lets me see unique architecture and traditions that I don’t encounter at home, which makes the experience more exciting.

× Yes, I very like capturing image of Griffin sceneries because I think a picture is worth 1000 of word.

✓ Yes, I really like capturing images of Griffin scenery because I think a picture is worth a thousand words.

Student used incorrect adverb placement ('very like' should be 'really like') and wrong noun forms ('image' should be plural 'images', 'sceneries' is uncommon; use 'scenery'). Also '1000 of word' is ungrammatical; correct idiom is 'a thousand words'. Suggestion: place adverbs before the verb for 'like' ('really like'), use correct plural nouns for countable items ('images') and use standard expressions ('a picture is worth a thousand words').

× It can freeze.

✓ It can capture a moment.

'Freeze' alone is unnatural in this context; collocation 'freeze a moment' is better expressed as 'capture a moment' or 'freeze a moment in time'. Also the previous sentence needs continuity. Suggestion: use appropriate collocations ('capture a moment') to convey meaning clearly.

× Uh uh, this my memory and my feeling at the moment when I see it again, I feel very.

✓ This is my memory and my feeling; when I see it again, I feel very emotional.

Missing verb 'is' ('this my' -> 'this is my'). The clause 'I feel very' is incomplete; add an adjective ('very emotional' or 'very moved'). Suggestion: ensure each noun phrase has a verb and complete adjective to finish the idea.

× Actually it depends on situation if I want a peaceful view or UMM I will prefer views in rural areas but sometimes I want bustling so I choose urban area.

✓ Actually it depends on the situation: if I want a peaceful view, I prefer views in rural areas; but sometimes I want a bustling scene, so I choose urban areas.

Missing article 'the' before 'situation' and punctuation helps clarity. 'I will prefer' is unnatural; use present simple 'I prefer' for general preferences. 'Sometimes I want bustling' needs a noun ('a bustling scene'), and 'urban area' should be plural to match 'areas'. Suggestion: include articles, use present simple for habits, and supply missing nouns.

× Actually I favour travelling in foreign countries because I always have wonders to travel around the world and I think our own country have many scenery that familiar, but in other country is have many cultural differences.

✓ Actually I favour travelling in foreign countries because I am always curious to travel around the world, and I think our own country has many familiar sceneries, but other countries have many cultural differences.

Errors: 'have wonders' is incorrect — use 'am always curious' or 'always want' (verb phrase). Subject-verb agreement: 'our own country have' should be 'our own country has'. 'Many scenery' is wrong; use plural 'many sceneries' or 'much scenery'. 'In other country is have' is ungrammatical; use 'other countries have'. Suggestion: fix idiomatic expressions ('curious to travel'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct pluralization for 'scenery' or use 'scenes'/'sceneries'.