Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "got the got the") and keep within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like "however" or "although" to contrast past and present. Also correct article usage and verb forms (e.g., "capturing pictures" → "taking pictures").

Ejemplo: I enjoyed taking pictures when I was a student because I had more free time and loved photographing nature. However, since I started working I have less time to go out and shoot landscapes. In the future I hope to return to this hobby by planning weekend photo trips.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Correct repetition and small grammar errors ("more of more of" → "more of a"; "in urban area" → "in an urban area"). Try to use slightly more varied vocabulary (e.g., "serene" or "scenic").

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because I enjoy peaceful, natural landscapes and cleaner air. For example, countryside scenes are more serene and better for photography, and they help me relax after a busy week in the city.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer (e.g., "I like both" or "I prefer views in other countries") and then give one or two specific examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases ("landings", "Pakistan's"). Use correct noun forms and finish your thoughts. Mention a specific foreign example to compare with K2. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad because each place has unique scenery. For instance, I admire K2 in Pakistan for its dramatic peaks, and I also appreciate the fjords of Norway for their striking coastal cliffs and quiet beauty.

× Capturing a pictures was a great hobby for me when I was a student, but since now when I got the got the job I really don't have much time to capture the nature and other aspect of life.

✓ Capturing pictures was a great hobby for me when I was a student, but since I got the job I really don't have much time to capture nature and other aspects of life.

Errors: 'a pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun (Article errors / Singular and plural issue), 'since now when I got the got the job' is ungrammatical and redundant (Sentence structure errors), 'capture the nature' and 'other aspect' use unnecessary definite article and singular/plural mismatch. Suggestions: Remove 'a' before 'pictures', simplify the time clause to 'since I got the job', drop 'the' before 'nature', and pluralize 'aspect' to 'aspects'. Overall ensure noun number and articles match the noun.

× But in the future I would really like to continue my this hobby.

✓ But in the future I would really like to continue this hobby.

'my this hobby' is incorrect word order for English possessive adjectives (Incorrect use of adjectives or pronouns / Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: Use 'this hobby' or 'my hobby' not both; place possessive before noun if needed: 'continue my hobby'.

× I currently live in urban area but I'm more of more of a nature person and I really do like peaceful and natural landscape.

✓ I currently live in an urban area, but I'm more of a nature person and I really do like peaceful, natural landscapes.

Errors: Missing article 'an' before 'urban area' (Article errors / Incorrect use of articles). Repetition 'more of more of' is redundant (Sentence structure). 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match general preference (Singular and plural issue). Also add comma between adjectives. Suggestions: Add 'an', remove duplicate phrase, pluralize 'landscape' to 'landscapes', and separate adjectives with a comma.

× So I like rural areas most because there are nature, fresh air and the peaceful environment.

✓ So I like rural areas most because there is nature, fresh air, and a peaceful environment.

Errors: 'there are nature' is incorrect because 'nature' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'is' (Subject-verb agreement / There be issue). 'the peaceful environment' can be generalized as 'a peaceful environment' or omitted article depending on meaning (Article errors). Suggestions: Use 'there is nature' or rephrase 'because rural areas have nature, fresh air, and a peaceful environment'.

× I admire geographical region of every side of earth.

✓ I admire the geographical regions of every part of the earth.

Errors: Missing definite article 'the' before 'geographical region' and incorrect preposition/phrase 'of every side of earth' (Article errors / Incorrect use of prepositions). Also 'region' should be plural to match 'every part' (Singular and plural issue). Suggestion: Use 'the geographical regions of every part of the earth' or 'geographical regions around the world'.

× For me the natural landscape, landings and mountains are very breathtaking and eye-catching.

✓ For me, natural landscapes, landforms, and mountains are very breathtaking and eye-catching.

Errors: 'the natural landscape' with inconsistent plurality; 'landings' is incorrect word choice—likely 'landforms' or 'landscapes' (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns). 'For me' should be followed by comma. Suggestions: Use plural nouns to discuss general features and replace 'landings' with 'landforms' or 'landscapes'.

× In Pakistan's there is a K2 mountain which I really admire but in other countries like.

✓ In Pakistan there is K2, which I really admire, but in other countries there are also many beautiful mountains.

Errors: Incorrect possessive 'Pakistan's' and unnecessary article 'a' before 'K2 mountain' (Article errors / Incorrect use of the definite article). Sentence is also incomplete and lacks parallel structure (Sentence structure errors). Suggestions: Use 'In Pakistan there is K2' or 'K2 is in Pakistan', omit 'a' before proper mountain name, complete the comparative clause: 'but in other countries there are also many beautiful mountains.'