Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban perlu lebih alami dan tata bahasa yang benar. Mulailah dengan kalimat topik langsung, gunakan bentuk kata kerja yang tepat dan hilangkan pengulangan. Tambahkan satu detail spesifik mengapa momen itu berharga.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos to capture special moments, such as sunsets or family gatherings, so I can remember how they felt later.

Sugerencia: Jawaban tidak relevan dengan pertanyaan. Anda harus menyatakan pilihan (urban atau rural) secara jelas, beri alasan singkat dan satu contoh spesifik untuk mendukung jawaban.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural landscapes like fields and forests, which help me relax after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Jawaban mengandung kebingungan dan pengulangan. Nyatakan pilihan dengan jelas, jelaskan alasan spesifik (mis. pegunungan di Jepang) dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih tersusun tanpa banyak pengisi suara.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries, especially places like Japan, because the mountainous scenery is very scenic and different from what I usually see at home.

× Yes, because when I love the moment, I must, I must taking pictures for the memories.

✓ Yes, because when I love a moment, I must, I must take pictures to remember it.

The original uses 'must taking' which is incorrect because modal verbs (must) must be followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Also 'the moment' is too specific; 'a moment' is more natural. Use 'take pictures' after 'must' and 'to remember it' rather than 'for the memories' for clarity. Suggestions: after a modal verb use the base verb (must take), use 'a moment' for a general occasion, and use 'to remember it' or 'as a memory' for intent.

× I don't like.

✓ I don't like (taking pictures of views).

The original sentence 'I don't like.' is incomplete and lacks context; it is a sentence structure error. The examiner asked about preference between urban or rural views, so the student should state what they do not like specifically. Suggestion: complete the sentence with the object or activity, e.g., 'I don't like urban views' or 'I don't like either' depending on intended meaning.

× I prefer, uh, I do like, prefer in my in another country because when I see feels in Japan, there are many mountains or, uh, good mountains.

✓ I prefer views in another country because when I see scenes in Japan there are many mountains.

This sentence has multiple structure problems: redundant fillers ('uh', 'I do like, prefer'), incorrect phrasing ('in my in another country'), and the phrase 'when I see feels in Japan' is ungrammatical. Simplify to 'I prefer views in another country because when I see scenes in Japan there are many mountains.' Use 'scenes' or 'views' instead of 'feels', remove redundant verbs, and avoid repeating prepositions. Also 'good mountains' is odd; simply 'many mountains' suffices.