Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, uh, repeated words), and use correct verb forms. Add one specific detail to support your feeling and use a linking word if needed. For example, say why photos remind you of memories and give a short example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they remind me of past moments. For example, a picture of my hometown fields always brings back memories of family picnics. Also, photos help me preserve those feelings for the future.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with coherent reasons. Use past tense correctly and avoid unnecessary hesitations. Use linking words (because, although, however) to connect ideas and provide a specific comparison between rural and urban views.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside and feel more relaxed there. For example, the open fields and quiet rivers are calming, whereas urban areas are busier and have more entertainment and tall buildings.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether you prefer your country or other countries, then give clear, specific comparisons and correct grammar (e.g., 'I have experience working in Sweden'). Reduce fillers and be more precise about differences you noticed (scenery, architecture, nature).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because there is a lot to see, such as houses, trees, and local wildlife. I have worked in Sweden and found it different: the landscapes were more open and quieter, while my country has busier streets and more diverse everyday scenes.

× Yes, I think umm, taking pictures of differ different views.

✓ Yes, I think taking pictures of different views.

Incorrect duplication and unnecessary filler words. Use the gerund 'taking' correctly with the verb 'think' followed by a noun phrase. Remove the extra word 'differ' and duplicate 'different'. Keep it concise: 'I think taking pictures of different views.'

× It's uh, very uh, reminds me the old, old moments and uh, it, it flashbacks things for me.

✓ It really reminds me of old moments, and it brings back memories for me.

Mix of incorrect pronoun/reference and verb usage. Use 'reminds me of' (correct preposition) and 'brings back memories' instead of 'flashbacks things'. Avoid stuttering and unnecessary repetitions. Use clear subject 'It' and correct verb phrases.

× For me, I prefer umm, rural, rural areas and views because I was grew up in a rural area, which is something Nasha and I might be can say that umm, urban use is a pretty as well because it's a lot of city, There's a lot of, uh, entertainments.

✓ For me, I prefer rural areas and views because I grew up in a rural area, but I might say that urban areas are nice too because there are many cities and a lot of entertainment.

Multiple tense and structure errors. Use simple past 'I grew up' (not 'was grew up'). Use parallel nouns 'urban areas' and 'rural areas'. Replace awkward phrases 'might be can say' with 'I might say' or 'I would say'. Use 'there are' for plural 'cities' and 'a lot of entertainment' (uncountable) or 'a lot of entertainment options'. Clear sentence structure improves coherence.

× Yeah, actually, umm, here in our country is a lot of things to be seen.

✓ Yeah, actually, here in our country there are a lot of things to see.

Incorrect use of 'there is' with plural 'things'. Use 'there are' for plural subjects and the infinitive 'to see' (not 'to be seen') for natural phrasing.

× There's a lot of houses, trees, animals, people and I also have been experience working in other country which is Sweden.

✓ There are many houses, trees, animals, and people, and I have also had the experience of working in another country, Sweden.

Use 'many' for countable plural nouns rather than 'a lot of' before listing; match plural 'there are'. Use present perfect 'I have had the experience' or 'I have experience' rather than 'have been experience'. Use 'another country' (not 'other country') and include commas for clarity.

× So it's a kind umm little bit umm difference, umm, different because in other countries there is no so much you've been seeing, uh.

✓ So it's kind of a little different because in other countries there is not so much to see.

Incorrect phrasing and unnecessary filler words. Use 'kind of' and 'a little different' for mild comparison. Use 'there is not so much to see' (or 'there is not much to see') for correct quantifier and infinitive structure. Avoid 'you've been seeing' which mixes tense and perspective awkwardly.