Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct singular/plural and possessive errors, and avoid vague phrases like “they have.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing various views because each scene has its own character. For example, I often experiment with different angles and locations to capture unique details, such as interesting textures or contrasting light, which makes each photo distinct.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to expand. Fix grammar (plural/singular, tense, articles) and reduce hesitations. Use specific sensory details instead of vague metaphors.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the architecture and city lights. For instance, at night the illuminated buildings create dramatic contrasts and reflections, which I find visually striking and great for photography.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct grammar and word choice. Use a clear reason and give a specific example comparing countries. Replace vague words like “others” and “few” with precise terms.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because their cities often feature better urban planning and diverse architecture. For example, when I visited Tokyo, the mix of modern skyscrapers and well-designed public spaces offered more interesting photo opportunities than many places at home.

× I like taking pictures of different view because I believe that every girl has their own beauty.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I believe that every girl has her own beauty.

'view' should be plural 'views' to match 'different'. 'their' refers to plural antecedent but 'every girl' is singular, so use singular possessive 'her'. Use consistent number agreement. Suggestion: Make nouns and pronouns agree in number: 'different views' and 'her own beauty.'

× I like to try a different angle, different spot for taking picture because it has their unique things and they have.

✓ I like to try different angles and different spots for taking pictures because they have unique features.

Several issues: 'different angle, different spot' should be plural to match general meaning; 'taking picture' needs plural 'pictures'; 'it has their unique things and they have' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replaced with 'they have unique features' where 'they' refers to angles/spots. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure (plural nouns) and use clear noun 'features' instead of vague 'things.'

× I prefer the view in urban area because I like the view of building, especially at night.

✓ I prefer the views in urban areas because I like the view of buildings, especially at night.

Use plural 'views' and 'urban areas' for general preference. 'building' should be plural 'buildings' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to general categories.

× I really love the city view because it, uh, shows the light in the dark.

✓ I really love the city view because it shows the lights in the dark.

'light' as a general countable concept here is better as plural 'lights' when referring to many light sources in a city. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal response. Suggestion: Use 'lights' to indicate multiple sources.

× It's like the building is glow in the dark.

✓ It's like the buildings glow in the dark.

Incorrect verb form 'is glow' should be simple present 'glow' for plural subject 'buildings'. Also use plural 'buildings' to match general statement. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb form: 'buildings glow.'

× I prefer the few in others country because others have the good urban planning of their building.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because they have good urban planning of their buildings.

Multiple errors: 'the few' is incorrect—use 'the views' or simply 'views'; 'others country' should be 'other countries' (plural); 'others' as subject is vague—use 'they' referring to those countries; 'the good urban planning' should be 'good urban planning'; 'their building' should be plural 'their buildings' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use plural forms and clear pronouns: 'views in other countries' and 'their buildings.'