Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, avoid repetition, correct grammar and use specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (e.g., “coloured” → “colors/colours”, “memorize” → “remember/memorialize”, “specific day” → “special days”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph natural landscapes and cozy restaurants because their colors and lighting make me feel relaxed. In addition, I take family photos to remember special days, such as birthdays and holidays.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and then support it with coherent reasons using linking words. Fix vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “urban areas” not “the urban for that”, “takes me to a world with no people”, “rural areas” not “series”, “variety of activities” instead of “exercises”). Avoid fillers like “umm” and repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views. In urban areas, I enjoy green spaces and lakes because they provide calm within the city, whereas rural areas appeal to me for their lively atmosphere and the variety of outdoor activities, such as hiking and cycling.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then expand with clear reasons and examples. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., “abroad” not “aboard”, “know the world in a variety” → “learn about different cultures and landscapes”). Remove asking the examiner to explain—answer confidently.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country, especially famous tourist spots, because they are familiar and culturally meaningful to me. However, I also want to travel abroad to see different landscapes and learn about other cultures, such as visiting mountains in Switzerland or historical sites in Japan.

× Yes, I like taking some pictures of different views like nature or restaurants because I feel so comfortable and I feel so comfortable and relaxed and the colored are beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, such as nature or restaurants, because I feel comfortable and relaxed and the colors are beautiful.

Repeated phrase 'I feel so comfortable' is redundant and should be written once. 'Some pictures' is unnatural here; 'taking pictures' is sufficient. 'Like' followed by examples is better as 'such as'. 'The colored are beautiful' is incorrect: 'colored' is not a noun here; use 'colors'. Also remove extra 'so' for conciseness. Suggestions: Say 'I feel comfortable and relaxed' once; use 'such as' for examples; use 'colors' instead of 'colored'.

× I also enjoy taking some pictures of my family so I can memorize those specific day, special day.

✓ I also enjoy taking pictures of my family so I can remember those specific, special days.

'Memorize' is incorrect in this context; native speakers 'remember' or 'capture the memory'. 'Day' must be plural to match 'those'. 'Some' before 'pictures' is unnecessary. Use adjectives order 'specific, special' with comma. Suggestions: use 'remember' and plural 'days'.

× But at this at the same time, I'd like to travel aboard and see, umm, more places and, and know the word in a variety I don't know.

✓ But at the same time, I'd like to travel abroad to see more places and learn about cultures and places I don't know.

Multiple problems: 'travel aboard' is wrong; correct is 'travel abroad'. 'See, umm, more places and, and know the word in a variety I don't know' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended 'learn about the world and its variety' or 'learn about cultures'. Use infinitive 'to see' and 'learn about' for purpose. Remove filler words. Suggestions: use 'travel abroad', 'see more places', and 'learn about the world or different cultures'.

× I prefer both of these areas. I like the urban for that, umm, green spaces and lakes that makes me feel comfortable and takes me to a world there's no no people.

✓ I like both urban and rural areas. I enjoy urban areas for their green spaces and lakes, which make me feel comfortable and take me to a world with few people.

'Both of these areas' is awkward; 'both urban and rural areas' is clearer. 'The urban' is incorrect; use 'urban areas' or 'the urban area' with context. 'That makes me feel' disagrees in number; 'green spaces and lakes' is plural so use 'which make me feel'. 'Takes me to a world there's no no people' is ungrammatical; correct to 'take me to a world with few people'. Suggestions: match plural subjects with plural verbs, use 'with few people' for intended meaning, and avoid repeated words like 'no no'.

× But at the same time, I'd like to live in the series because of their energy and the activity, variety of exercises I can do.

✓ But at the same time, I'd like to live in the city because of its energy and the variety of activities I can do.

'Series' is incorrect word; should be 'city'. 'Their' is wrong because 'city' is singular; use 'its'. 'the activity, variety of exercises' is misordered and 'exercises' is wrong choice; use 'variety of activities'. Suggestions: use correct noun 'city', match possessive pronoun to singular noun, and use 'variety of activities'.

× I prefer views in my own country, uh, especially the, the tourist areas.

✓ I prefer views in my own country, especially the tourist areas.

Sentence mainly punctuation/filler issues. Remove repeated 'the' and filler 'uh'. 'In my own country, especially the tourist areas' is correct. Suggestions: avoid filler words and repeated determiners.