Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words if adding details and keep to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photography has been my hobby since childhood. For example, I often capture sunsets and city skylines, which help me practice composition and lighting.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference or balanced statement, then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however', 'also'). Reduce hesitations and repetition and keep it within three sentences.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views because each offers different subjects. Urban scenes fascinate me with striking skyscrapers and busy streets, while rural landscapes appeal through tranquil fields and grazing cattle.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and confidently — say your preference, then support with concise, specific details (places, occasions). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid filler repetitions.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I have more opportunities to travel around India. For example, my father’s army postings let me visit many states, and I’ve taken memorable photos of northern landscapes such as mountain villages and forts.

× Yes indeed, I am a very good photographer and I love to capture the moment in in a lens and and it has been this has been a hobby since my childhood that I have I had enough of I I all have a good sense.

✓ Yes indeed, I am a photographer and I love to capture moments through a lens, and it has been a hobby since my childhood because I have a good sense for photography.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'moment', repetition of words, and unclear phrasing. Use plural 'moments' to speak generally, 'through a lens' is the correct prepositional phrase, remove repeated words and restructure the clause for clarity. Suggestion: keep sentences concise, use plural for general activities and appropriate articles ('a' lens).

× Well, both the sceneries attract me because the skyscrapers of the urban uh, states, uh, attract me towards them and at the same time, umm, the rural areas, the farm lands and the umm, cattle's grazing on the grass, uh, all captivate, uh, all captivate to my attention towards.

✓ Well, both kinds of scenery attract me because urban skyscrapers draw my attention, and at the same time, rural areas, farmlands and cattle grazing on the grass also captivate me.

Errors: 'sceneries' is uncountable here; use 'scenery' or 'kinds of scenery'. 'Attract me towards them' and 'captivate to my attention towards' are incorrect prepositional uses. Use verbs that take direct objects ('draw my attention', 'captivate me'). Also correct 'farm lands' to 'farmlands' and remove repetitions. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and pair verbs with appropriate prepositions or direct objects.

× Well I I don't have the the exposure to other countries so I can just tell about my own country.

✓ Well, I don't have exposure to other countries, so I can only speak about my own country.

Errors: repeated words and awkward phrase 'tell about'. Use 'speak about' or 'talk about'. Remove redundant article 'the' before 'exposure'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose the correct verb for expressing ability to discuss a topic.

× I have collected many images from different parts of my country.

✓ I have collected many images from different parts of my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. Present perfect 'have collected' is appropriate to show experiences up to now, so no change is necessary.

× As my father was in army so I have visited many states of India.

✓ As my father was in the army, I have visited many states of India.

Error: missing definite article before 'army'—use 'the army'. The sentence mixes cause and effect; adding a comma and removing 'so' or repositioning it improves flow. Suggestion: include 'the' with 'army' and consider tense consistency; present perfect 'have visited' is fine to indicate life experience.

× So in the north I got the chance to click the photo.

✓ So in the north I had the chance to take photos.

Errors: informal phrasal 'click the photo' is nonstandard; use 'take photos' or 'take a photo'. 'Got the chance' is colloquial; 'had the chance' is more natural in this narrative. Suggestion: use standard collocations ('take photos') and keep tense consistent with previous present perfect experiences.