Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda singkat, kurang jelas dan mengandung pengulangan. Untuk meningkatkan: (1) Mulailah dengan kalimat topik langsung menjawab pertanyaan. (2) Berikan satu atau dua detail spesifik (mis. jenis pemandangan atau alasan konkret). (3) Hindari pengulangan dan perbaiki tata bahasa (gunakan "because" dengan klausa yang jelas). Contoh struktur: topik + alasan + contoh singkat. Latih pengucapan frasa yang sering salah seperti "different views" dan gunakan linking words sederhana seperti "because" atau "for example".

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture unique moods. For example, I like photographing coastal sunsets for their vibrant colors and city skylines at night because the lights create a dramatic contrast.

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda tidak menjawab pertanyaan secara langsung (membutuhkan pilihan antara urban atau rural) dan terlalu singkat tanpa penjelasan. Untuk memperbaiki: (1) Berikan pilihan tegas (urban atau rural). (2) Tambahkan satu atau dua alasan spesifik menggunakan linking word seperti "because" atau "because of". (3) Jika perlu, sertakan contoh singkat untuk memperjelas preferensi Anda.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery and quieter environments. For example, I often photograph hills and forests where light and textures are more interesting than in busy streets.

Sugerencia: Jawaban ini tidak jelas dan memiliki kesalahan tata bahasa serta pengulangan. Untuk meningkatkan: (1) Nyatakan pilihan Anda jelas (own country atau other countries). (2) Jelaskan alasan spesifik dan logis menggunakan linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). (3) Hindari pengulangan kata seperti "few" dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat seperti "scenery" atau "memories". (4) Batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 5 kalimat.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes that I can't see at home. For instance, when I travel abroad I enjoy photographing traditional architecture and street scenes, which create memorable photos.

× I like taking pictures with the different views because it's a it's a good idea.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because it's a good idea.

The phrase 'the different views' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the'. When speaking generally about kinds of views, do not use 'the'. Also 'with the different views' is an incorrect preposition choice; use 'of' after 'pictures'. Remove the duplicated filler 'it's a'. Suggested improvement: say 'I like taking pictures of different views because it's a good idea.'

× No, I don't.

✓ I don't prefer one over the other.

The brief reply 'No, I don't.' is unclear in context; the question asks a choice between urban and rural views. It's better to respond with a complete sentence that matches the question. Suggested improvement: 'I don't prefer one over the other.' to clearly indicate no preference.

× I prefer few in another countries because it's a struggle when I visit uh there with a few with the memorable, memorable few.

✓ I prefer a few places in other countries because it's a struggle when I visit them, but those few are memorable.

Multiple errors: 'few' needs an article 'a few' when meaning some; 'another countries' mixes singular 'another' with plural 'countries' — use 'other countries'; 'visit uh there' is awkward—use 'visit them' or 'visit there'; 'with a few with the memorable, memorable few' is repetitive and ungrammatical. The corrected version fixes plural/singular agreement and clarifies meaning. Suggested improvement: 'I prefer a few places in other countries because visiting them can be a struggle, but those places are memorable.'