School— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition; give a clear topic sentence and one specific detail. Also correct small grammar: say 'I can walk to school' instead of 'I can go by walking.'

Ejemplo: My school is close to my home, about a 10-minute walk. For example, I usually walk past a small park on my way there.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear direct answer, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and correct phrasing (e.g., 'it was difficult for me to communicate').

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my school because the students are friendly and the teachers are supportive. For example, my classmates often help me with projects, which makes me feel comfortable.

Sugerencia: Good structure and clarity. Improve by using slightly more varied vocabulary and adding a short specific example to support your point.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it's an excellent place to study because the teachers are supportive and explain difficult topics clearly. For instance, my math teacher uses step-by-step examples that helped me improve my grades.

Sugerencia: Be specific about what 'problems' you mean and use linking words to explain consequences. Also correct singular/plural: 'students' not 'student.' Try to give one concrete example.

Ejemplo: At the moment the environment could be better because many students feel stressed due to large class sizes. For example, with 40 students per class, it's hard to get individual help from the teacher.

Sugerencia: Answer directly about 'interest' rather than 'studying' in general; explain why interest matters and provide a brief example or result. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore.'

Ejemplo: Interest in study is very important because it motivates you to learn deeply and persist through challenges. For example, when I'm genuinely interested in a subject, I spend extra time reading about it and my grades improve, which can lead to better job opportunities.

× I I can go by walking.

✓ I can go by walking.

There is a duplication of 'I'. This is not a tense or verb-form error but a simple repetition. Remove the extra 'I' so the sentence reads correctly. Also note: 'go by walking' is acceptable, but more natural phrasing is 'walk' (e.g. 'I can walk to school').

× Currently, I like it. I like the students, I like my teacher, I can, I feel comfortable with it.

✓ Currently, I like it. I like the students and my teacher; I feel comfortable there.

The original uses 'it' awkwardly for 'school' and repeats 'I like'. Combine clauses and replace 'it' with 'there' when referring to a location. Remove the fragment 'I can' which is incomplete. Use conjunctions to join related ideas for clarity.

× But when I was in the elementary school, it was difficult and hard to me to communicate with others.

✓ But when I was in elementary school, it was difficult for me to communicate with others.

Use 'in elementary school' (no definite article) and the correct preposition is 'for me' after 'difficult'. 'Difficult and hard' is redundant; use one adjective. This fixes word choice and preposition errors.

× Yeah, I think it's a great place to study because it has a supportive and professional teacher who explains things clearly.

✓ Yeah, I think it's a great place to study because it has supportive and professional teachers who explain things clearly.

If referring to a school generally, plural 'teachers' is more natural with plural verb 'explain'. Original uses singular 'teacher' with 'it has' which is grammatical but less natural; change to plural for agreement with general statement.

× Right now it's not that good because there's some problems facing the student.

✓ Right now it's not that good because there are some problems facing the students.

Use 'there are' with plural 'problems' (subject-verb agreement). 'Some problems' is plural so 'are' is required. Use plural 'students' if referring to students in general. Also avoid contraction 'there's' for plural subjects.

× In my opinion, studying is the best way to achieve success because if you're doing well in it, you will have a good and comfortable job with high income.

✓ In my opinion, studying is the best way to achieve success because if you do well in it, you will have a good, comfortable job with a high income.

Use simple present 'do well' in conditional clauses for general truths instead of present continuous 'you're doing well'. Add articles: 'a high income' and commas to separate adjectives. This improves tense consistency and article usage.