Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và đúng ngữ pháp. Tránh lặp từ và câu bị đảo trật tự. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao bạn không dùng chiếc xe nữa. Sử dụng thì quá khứ cho vật sở hữu trong quá khứ và thì hiện tại cho tình trạng hiện tại. Ví dụ: “I used to have a bike when I was a child. It broke a few years ago, so I don’t use it anymore.”

Ejemplo: I used to have a bike when I was a child. It broke a few years ago, so I don’t use it anymore.

Sugerencia: Cần tổ chức câu mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng ý chính, rồi dùng liên từ để giải thích nguyên nhân và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa lỗi từ vựng ("buying" không đúng; nên nói "bicycles"). Dùng cấu trúc so sánh/biểu thị sự thay đổi với từ liên kết như "but" hoặc "however". Ví dụ nêu lí do cụ thể (giá cả, tiện lợi, tầm phủ sóng).

Ejemplo: I think bicycles used to be very popular in Vietnam, but nowadays they have largely been replaced by motorcycles and cars because these vehicles are cheaper and faster for long distances.

× Actually I used to have a bike when I was a child but I now I have no had it broken and I am and I does it don't use it anymore.

✓ Actually I used to have a bike when I was a child but now it is broken and I don't use it anymore.

Multiple tense and auxiliary errors: 'I now I have no had it broken' mixes present and past incorrectly; use present passive 'it is broken' to describe current state. 'I am and I does it don't use it anymore' contains incorrect auxiliary and subject-verb agreement; use 'I don't use it anymore'. Suggestion: simplify sentence: 'I used to have a bike when I was a child, but now it is broken and I don't use it anymore.' Keep past for 'used to' and present simple for current state.

× In my opinion I think buying used to be very popular in my country Vietnam, but nowadays they all being replaced by motorcycles and cars due to the the cheap of those vehicle.

✓ In my opinion, bikes used to be very popular in my country, Vietnam, but nowadays they are being replaced by motorcycles and cars because those vehicles are cheap.

Errors involve incorrect tense and verb form: 'buying used to be' is wrong; 'bikes used to be' correctly expresses past habit. 'they all being replaced' lacks auxiliary 'are' for present continuous passive; use 'are being replaced'. 'due to the the cheap of those vehicle' is incorrect word choice and article use; use 'because those vehicles are cheap' or 'due to the low cost of those vehicles'. Suggestions: use 'used to' with a noun (bikes), ensure passive has auxiliary 'are', and use correct nouns and articles ('vehicles' plural) and clearer causal phrase.