Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article errors, avoid redundancy, and limit to about 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. I have had the same bicycle since my childhood; my mother gave it to me for my eighth birthday. Because it was sturdy and comfortable, I used it to ride to school every day, and many of my friends admired its bright colour. It’s still special to me because it brings back happy memories.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear direct answer, then give two specific reasons with correct linking words and clearer vocabulary. Fix grammar (articles, plural forms), avoid filler sounds, and make sentences concise and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, there is a wide range of models—city scooters, sport bikes and classic motorcycles—so people can choose one that fits their lifestyle. Secondly, bikes are often faster in congested cities and help reduce traffic and parking problems.

× Yes, from my childhood till now I have a bike which is given by my mother on my 8th birthday.

✓ Yes, from my childhood till now I have a bike which was given to me by my mother on my 8th birthday.

The sentence uses 'given' without the correct passive auxiliary and missing 'to me'. For a past action completed when you were 8, use the past passive 'was given to me'. Suggestion: use 'was given to me' for clarity and correct past passive formation.

× It's very lovely bike and my friends also like it very much.

✓ It's a very lovely bike and my friends also like it very much.

The noun 'bike' requires an article before the adjective phrase. 'Very' modifies the adjective 'lovely' correctly, but the indefinite article 'a' is missing. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'very lovely bike'.

× Whenever I went to school in my Charu, I used to go on it.

✓ Whenever I went to school in my charu, I used to go on it.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for describing using a vehicle; 'on' or 'by' are typical. The sentence already uses 'on it' later, so 'in my Charu' should be 'on my Charu' to indicate riding the bike. Also proper noun capitalization depends on whether 'Charu' is a model name; keep capitalization accordingly. Suggestion: use 'on' for bikes or 'by' + vehicle.

× It's very special for me.

✓ It is very special to me.

While 'special for me' is understandable, the more natural collocation is 'special to me'. This is a sentence structure/collocation issue. Suggestion: use 'special to me' when describing personal significance.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because there are variety of bikes nowadays and people can choose the bike according to their taste like motorcycle, sports bike and bullets.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because there is a variety of bikes nowadays and people can choose a bike according to their taste, such as motorcycles, sports bikes, and Bullets.

'There are variety of bikes' is ungrammatical: use 'there is a variety of' or better 'there are a variety of bikes'. Also 'the bike' should be 'a bike' for general choice. Items in a list need plural forms for general categories and commas. 'Bullets' (Royal Enfield Bullet) is a model name and should be capitalized. Suggestion: use 'there are a variety of bikes' or 'there is a variety of bikes', use 'a bike' for general reference, and plural nouns for categories.

× Uh, because the bikes take less time to reach on their location and it's also reduce the traffic.

✓ Because bikes take less time to reach their destinations and they also reduce traffic.

Several issues: 'take less time to reach on their location' is ungrammatical—use 'reach their destination(s)' or 'reach a location'. 'It's also reduce' is incorrect verb form and pronoun: use 'they also reduce' (plural subject) or 'they also help reduce'. This combines subject-verb agreement and adverb/phrase placement. Suggestion: rephrase to 'bikes take less time to reach their destinations and they also reduce traffic' or 'bikes help reduce traffic.'