Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I did. There was a small red bike when I was a child and in the holiday my favorite things to do is just ride it and go around my community and meet a lot of people and a lot of neighborhoods. There's a perfect time for me.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Maybe it's quite popular, but last year I went to Netherlands. I think bike is not as popular as Netherlands since we don't have a, we don't have a road that is for bike specifically in Taiwan, so it's maybe popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 回答要更直接並且語法正確,避免冗長與重複。開頭應有主題句(直接回應問題),接著用1–2句具體細節支持,例如描述自行車的特徵、你常去的地方或和誰一起騎。注意時態一致,連接詞可用“because/so/and/when”等使句子更連貫。整體控制在最多五句以內。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that I loved. During holidays I often rode it around my neighborhood to visit friends and explore nearby parks. Because it was lightweight, I could ride for hours without getting tired. Those rides were some of my happiest childhood memories.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 64.0Sugerencia: 回答要更清晰地表達比較與原因。先給出明確立場(Yes/No/Partly),然後用一兩句具體原因支持比較(例如基礎設施、文化或統計)。避免口語重複(例如 “we don't have a, we don't have a”),注意語法和流暢性。
Ejemplo: I think bikes are somewhat popular in my country, but not as common as in the Netherlands. In Taiwan many people use scooters or cars, and we lack dedicated bike lanes in many cities, so cycling is less convenient. If the government improved cycling infrastructure, more people might choose bikes for short trips.
× There was a small red bike when I was a child and in the holiday my favorite things to do is just ride it and go around my community and meet a lot of people and a lot of neighborhoods.
✓ There was a small red bike when I was a child, and during the holidays my favorite thing to do was just ride it, go around my community, and meet a lot of people in many neighborhoods.
句子描述过去的习惯或常发生的动作,时态应一致使用过去式。原句中“is”与上下文的过去时不一致,且复数/单数短语使用不当("things to do"与后文不一致)。建议将“in the holiday”改为更自然的“during the holidays”,把“my favorite things to do is”改为过去式单数结构“my favorite thing to do was”。此外用逗号分隔并调整短语顺序使句子更清晰。
× Maybe it's quite popular, but last year I went to Netherlands.
✓ Maybe it's quite popular, but last year I went to the Netherlands.
该句主体谈及现在情况用现在时“it's”是可以的,但地名前应使用定冠词“the”——荷兰用“The Netherlands”。这属于冠词使用(条目22/17),但更直接是当前句的名词搭配错误,按清单中最接近的项选择为“Present tense issue”因为句中同时出现现在/过去时需注意时态对比。建议在国名“The Netherlands”前加定冠词,并保持时态一致(“last year I went”保持过去时)。
× I think bike is not as popular as Netherlands since we don't have a, we don't have a road that is for bike specifically in Taiwan, so it's maybe popular.
✓ I think bikes are not as popular as in the Netherlands since we don't have roads specifically for bikes in Taiwan, so they are maybe less popular.
原句中存在单复数不一致:"bike is" 应为复数形式表示一般概念"bikes are",且“Netherlands”前需加定冠词并与介词搭配为"in the Netherlands"。另外“a road that is for bike specifically”应改为复数及更自然的结构"roads specifically for bikes"。最后一句“so it's maybe popular”结构混乱,应明确主语和比较结果,如"so they are maybe less popular"。建议使用复数形式表示通用概念,并调整句子结构以保持主谓一致和语义清晰。