Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating which languages you speak, then give one or two specific supporting details (where you use them and why). Use linking words like "and" or "so" correctly and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I can speak Filipino and Ilocano. I use Filipino for national communication and Ilocano at home and in my province, so I can easily understand people from nearby areas with different accents.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Fix grammar (your→you have/are; more easier → easier). Keep it to two or three sentences and avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: I don't think learning a new language is very difficult if you are persistent and positive. With regular practice and exposure, such as speaking with native speakers and studying every day, you can overcome the initial challenges.

Sugerencia: Answer directly which language you will learn and give two clear reasons using linking words like "because" and "so". Correct redundancies (the the; dialect vs language) and keep sentences compact.

Ejemplo: Yes, I plan to learn French because I live in Quebec and speaking French will help me connect with the local community. Also, learning French will let me understand local culture and make daily life easier.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement and follow with two specific reasons. Improve grammar (learned→have learned; you can able to→you can) and avoid awkward phrases like "most important to the foreign country." Use linking words such as "because" and "so."

Ejemplo: I have learned English since childhood because it is part of the school curriculum in the Philippines. Because English is an international language, it helps me communicate with people from other countries and improves my job prospects.

× In the Philippines we have a under 7 dialects but in my province I can able to to speak at least 2 languages so that I can able to communicate to other provinces as well since we have different accent and dialects that were spoken of.

✓ In the Philippines we have under seven dialects, but in my province I can speak at least two languages so that I can communicate with other provinces as well since we have different accents and dialects.

Errors: 'a under 7 dialects' mixes singular article with plural noun and numeral; use 'under seven dialects'. Use numerals written as words for small numbers in formal writing. 'can able to to speak' is redundant ('can' and 'able to' both express ability) and has a repeated 'to'; correct to 'can speak' or 'am able to speak'. '2' should be 'two'. 'communicate to other provinces' uses wrong preposition; correct is 'communicate with other provinces'. 'different accent and dialects that were spoken of' has number mismatch and awkward passive; use 'different accents and dialects.' Suggestion: remove redundant words, ensure number agreement, use correct prepositions, and keep parallel structure.

× I don't think it's difficult to learn a new language if your perseverance as well as the positivity of learning a new thing, it makes things more easier.

✓ I don't think it's difficult to learn a new language if you have perseverance and a positive attitude toward learning; it makes things easier.

Errors: 'your perseverance' should be 'you have perseverance' or 'you are perseverant' — incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure (type 12 and 4) but primary is modal/context of ability linked to condition. 'as well as the positivity of learning a new thing' is awkward and uses noun forms incorrectly; use 'a positive attitude toward learning'. 'it makes things more easier' is comparative error: 'more easier' is incorrect; use 'easier'. Suggestion: use a clear conditional clause ('if you have...'), correct collocations ('positive attitude'), and avoid double comparatives.

× As well as learning the dialect most importantly of different of the foreign country is also a challenging one that you need to overcome.

✓ Also, learning the dialects of a foreign country is a challenging task that you need to overcome.

Errors: 'learning the dialect most importantly of different of the foreign country' has incorrect word order and prepositions ('of different of the foreign country'); correct is 'dialects of a foreign country'. 'a challenging one' is informal and vague; better 'a challenging task'. Suggestion: reorder phrase to 'learning the dialects of a foreign country' and use clear noun phrases.

× Yes, I probably want to learn future dialects, most importantly the French, because I live here in the the province of Quebec and learning the new dialect, most importantly the French, is the good start for me to connect with the community as well as the cultural aspect of the. The people.

✓ Yes, I probably want to learn more dialects in the future, most importantly French, because I live here in the province of Quebec and learning French is a good start for me to connect with the community and its culture.

Errors: 'learn future dialects' misorders future marker; use 'learn more dialects in the future'. 'the French' should be 'French' when referring to the language. Repeated 'the the' and fragmented sentence 'the cultural aspect of the. The people.' are sentence structure errors. 'is the good start' needs article 'a good start' (article error). Suggestion: place 'in the future' after 'learn', remove extra articles, and combine fragments into one clear sentence.

× I learned English since way back in the Philippines and it is part of our school curriculum.

✓ I have learned English since way back in the Philippines, and it has been part of our school curriculum.

Errors: 'I learned English since' mixes past simple with 'since' which requires present perfect to describe an action that began in the past and continues: use 'I have learned' or better 'I have been learning'. 'it is part' should be 'it has been part' to match continuity. Suggestion: use present perfect ('have learned/has been') with 'since' to indicate ongoing relevance.

× Moreover, learning English language is a universal aspect that you can able to to connect with different people is most important to the foreign country and it is also a better pro prospect that you can able to communicate effectively to the native speaker.

✓ Moreover, learning the English language is important because it allows you to connect with different people and is useful in foreign countries; it is also a better prospect for communicating effectively with native speakers.

Errors: 'learning English language' needs article 'the English language'. 'you can able to to connect' is redundant and duplicated ('can' + 'able to' and double 'to'); reduce to 'allows you to connect'. 'is most important to the foreign country' is unclear and uses wrong preposition; better 'is useful in foreign countries'. 'a better pro prospect' is incorrect collocation; use 'a better prospect'. 'to the native speaker' should be 'with native speakers'. Suggestion: fix articles, remove redundant modal/ability constructions, use correct prepositions, and choose appropriate collocations.