Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and verb form errors. Use linking words like 'because' properly and keep to 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends. I check in with them every day because it helps me relax and feel supported. For example, we share updates about work and plans, which keeps me connected to their lives.

提案: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence about typical topics, then give one specific example. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary; avoid filler words and repetition. Keep sentences short and coherent, using linking words like 'for example' correctly.

例: We usually talk about daily life and plans. For example, when we go to lunch, we discuss what we did that morning, recent movies we watched and upcoming events.

提案: Clarify preference with a direct statement, then explain reason with a specific example. Fix vocabulary and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases.

例: I prefer chatting in a small group. This is because I can get different opinions quickly, so decisions or plans are made faster than messaging each person individually.

提案: State your preference clearly, then support it with specific reasons and one example. Use accurate phrases to describe non-verbal cues (eye contact, body language) and avoid awkward phrasing.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read non-verbal cues. For instance, eye contact and body language help me understand how someone truly feels, which is harder to tell over social media.

提案: Begin with a direct answer, then explain when and how arguments happen using linking words. Be specific about how you resolve conflicts and avoid repeating phrases. Keep to two or three concise sentences.

例: Yes, I do sometimes when we have different opinions. We discuss our viewpoints calmly and try to find a compromise or a practical solution that suits everyone.

× Yes I do, I have some close friends that I check in to them every single day 'cause it's helped me to relax and help me to feel supported and up to date to their life.

✓ Yes, I do. I have some close friends whom I check in with every single day because it helps me relax, makes me feel supported, and keeps me up to date with their lives.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'check in to them' should be 'check in with them'; 'up to date to their life' should be 'up to date with their lives'. Also tense/agreement: 'it's helped me' is incorrect; use simple present 'it helps me' for a habitual action. Suggestions: Use the correct preposition 'with' after 'check in', use 'keep someone up to date with' and match subject-verb agreement and present tense for routines.

× I usually sweating just like something you doing at that time.

✓ I usually talk about what someone is doing at that time.

Errors: 'I usually sweating' incorrectly uses -ing form; should use a verb that expresses habitual action like 'talk about'. 'something you doing' is missing auxiliary 'are' and unclear pronoun. Suggestions: Use simple present for habits ('I usually talk about') and use correct present continuous form for the action being described ('what someone is doing').

× For example, when I going going to lunch with my girlfriends, I was taking him right.

✓ For example, when I went to lunch with my girlfriends, I took him with me.

Errors: 'going going' is fragmented and missing auxiliary; for a past event use simple past 'went'. 'I was taking him right' is ungrammatical; to express bringing someone use 'I took him with me'. Suggestions: Use simple past for completed actions and a clear verb phrase 'take someone with me'.

× I I I am here in the Parkins.

✓ I am here in the park.

Errors: Repetition 'I I I' is disfluent; 'the Parkins' is unclear and likely incorrect article/name. Suggestions: Remove repetitions and use correct noun 'park' with appropriate article 'the' only if referring to a specific known park. If 'Parkins' was a name, clarify and capitalize properly.

× I would prefer forest Gov chat because I can't send them only one time.

✓ I would prefer group chats because I can't message everyone at the same time.

Errors: 'forest Gov chat' appears to be garbled; likely 'group chat'. 'I can't send them only one time' is incorrect phrasing; use 'can't message everyone at the same time'. Suggestions: Use clear nouns ('group chats') and correct modal meaning with 'can't' plus base verb 'message' and phrase 'at the same time' to express simultaneity.

× If I send each other is resolved Tom and consume result time for me so I think I it's quite more more.

✓ If we send messages to each other, it gets confusing and wastes time for me, so I think it's less efficient.

Errors: 'If I send each other' mixes pronouns; use 'we send messages to each other'. 'is resolved Tom' is unintelligible—likely 'it gets confused' or 'it is confusing'. 'consume result time' should be 'wastes time'. Repetition 'more more' and 'I it's' are incorrect. Suggestions: Use clear subject-verb structure ('it gets confusing', 'wastes time') and concise comparative language ('less efficient').

× I definitely like face to face more than social media because in face to face it can know what they think.

✓ I definitely prefer face-to-face communication to social media because, in face-to-face conversations, you can tell what someone thinks.

Errors: 'like face to face more than' is acceptable but 'prefer...to' is more natural. 'in face to face it can know what they think' has wrong pronoun and modal structure; use 'you can tell what someone thinks'. Suggestions: Use 'prefer A to B', hyphenate 'face-to-face' as a compound adjective, and use 'you can tell' to express ability to perceive thoughts.

× By knowing there's not human like physical you can know your eye, their eyes.

✓ By seeing them in person, you can read their facial expressions and eyes.

Errors: 'there's not human like physical' is ungrammatical; unclear meaning. 'you can know your eye, their eyes' mixes pronouns and nouns. Suggestions: Use clear phrasing like 'seeing them in person' and refer to 'facial expressions and eyes' to explain nonverbal cues.

× Yes, I do. I usually argue with friends if we have some, if we have some opinion that's quite different.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually argue with friends if we have opinions that are quite different.

Errors: Repetition 'if we have some, if we have some opinion' is redundant. Use plural 'opinions' and correct relative clause 'that are quite different' for agreement. Suggestions: Use concise phrasing and ensure subject-verb agreement ('opinions that are different').

× So we usually argue and find the best way to solve that problem. All right.

✓ So we usually discuss and try to find the best way to solve the problem.

Errors: 'argue and find the best way to solve that problem' is acceptable but 'argue' can imply conflict; 'discuss and try to find' is clearer. 'All right' is unnecessary filler. Suggestions: Use neutral verbs like 'discuss' for cooperative problem-solving and avoid filler phrases in responses.