Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and correct grammar; keep answer natural and concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, correct singular/plural and word choice, and avoid contradiction. Add one brief supporting detail using a linking word.

例: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends is my favorite way to spend free time because it helps me relax and forget daily worries. For example, talking about movies or schoolwork usually makes me feel better.

提案: Give a clearer topic sentence and specific examples; fix grammar and word choice. Use linking words (for example, often) and limit to 2–3 short sentences with precise vocabulary (school life, politics, social media trends).

例: We usually talk about everyday subjects. For example, we often discuss school life, upcoming exams, or popular topics from social media, and sometimes we talk about local politics.

提案: Start with a clear preference sentence and give one supporting reason linked with a conjunction. Correct phrasing ("one-on-one" or "one friend"), and avoid unnecessary phrases like 'on the road.' Keep to two sentences.

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it feels more private. However, group chats are good too when I want to share happiness with many people.

提案: Provide a direct preference, then contrast with a brief reason using linking words (however, although). Use precise language and avoid repetition. Two sentences are enough.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and I can read body language. Although social media is convenient and saves time, I still enjoy meeting friends in person.

提案: This answer is confusing and has many errors. Give a clear direct answer (yes/no), then explain with a short reason and a brief example. Use simple, correct phrases (rarely, disagree, reach an agreement, harsh). Limit to two sentences.

例: Rarely — we usually agree on most things, so arguments are uncommon. When we do disagree, it is usually over small issues and we resolve them quickly.

× Chatting with friend is my favorite activity when I have free time.

✓ Chatting with friends is my favorite activity when I have free time.

This sentence uses the singular 'friend' but the context implies chatting with multiple people in general; use the plural 'friends'. Use plural nouns for general activities that involve more than one person. Suggestion: use 'friends' when referring to friends in general.

× The activity makes me feel relaxed and really stressed.

✓ The activity makes me feel relaxed and less stressed.

The original contradicts itself by saying both 'relaxed' and 'really stressed'. Likely intended meaning is reduced stress. Use 'less stressed' or 'not stressed' to convey decreased stress. Also 'really stressed' is an adverb-adjective pair but context requires contrast.

× Any topic that occurs in our daily life.

✓ We talk about any topics that occur in our daily life.

This fragment lacks a clear subject and verb for a full sentence and uses singular 'topic' awkwardly. The question asked 'What do you usually chat about?' so a full sentence should be 'We talk about any topics...'. Use present simple for habitual actions and plural 'topics' for general references.

× Sometime we worship about school life and sometimes it's politic or something that's appear in the social media.

✓ Sometimes we talk about school life, and sometimes about politics or things that appear on social media.

Multiple issues: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'; 'worship about' is incorrect verb choice — likely 'talk about'; 'it's politic' should be 'politics'; 'something that's appear' has subject-verb agreement and tense errors — use 'things that appear'; use preposition 'on social media'. Corrections align adverb placement and proper collocations.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend on the road.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend while walking on the road.

'Only one friend on the road' is unclear; use 'just one friend' and 'while walking on the road' for clarity. 'Only' placement can change meaning; 'just' is a better quantifier here.

× Chatting with a group of people, we can share happiness or sadness with many people.

✓ When I chat with a group of people, we can share happiness or sadness with each other.

Original has awkward introductory phrase and repeats 'people'. Use 'When I chat...' to indicate circumstance and 'each other' to express mutual sharing. This fixes sentence structure and redundancy.

× Chatting one friend may bring more privacy to me.

✓ Chatting with one friend may give me more privacy.

Missing preposition 'with' and awkward phrasing 'bring more privacy to me'. Use 'give me more privacy'. This corrects quantifier/use of noun phrase.

× For me, communicating face to face is a better choice.

✓ For me, communicating face to face is the better choice.

Minor article choice: use 'the better choice' to compare with other options in context. Present simple 'is' is correct for general preference.

× Social media may bring something convenient and comfortable, and you don't have to go out.

✓ Social media may be convenient and comfortable, and you don't have to go out.

'Bring something convenient and comfortable' is unnatural. Use adjective structure 'may be convenient and comfortable'. This improves collocation and conciseness.

× But I want to see my friend face to face.

✓ But I want to see my friends face to face.

Context earlier refers to chatting with friends plural; if expressing general preference, use plural 'friends'. If the student means a specific friend, original is acceptable. Make plural to match general context.

× One is the blue moon because we often drift to an agreement when we discard about something, so it's really hard harsh when we argue with each other.

✓ Once in a blue moon we argue because we often reach an agreement; when we do argue, it can be very harsh.

This sentence has many issues: 'One is the blue moon' should be 'Once in a blue moon' meaning rarely; 'drift to an agreement' should be 'reach an agreement'; 'discard about something' is incorrect — likely 'discuss something'; 'it's really hard harsh' is ungrammatical — use 'it can be very harsh'. The corrections fix idiom usage, verb choice, and word order. Also break into two clauses for clarity.