Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите короче и яснее: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно конкретное объяснение. Избегайте междометий (например, "uh") и грамматических ошибок (напр., "I reading"). Используйте правильные времена и структуру: "I like reading because..." или "I don't read often because...".

例: Yes, I like reading. I especially enjoy short stories because they are easy to finish and often have surprising endings.

提案: Отвечайте прямо, используйте правильные формы и добавьте одно-две конкретные причины, связанные с личным опытом. Избегайте разговорных пауз и некорректных выражений (например, "is lose my vision"). Сформулируйте как: "I prefer... because..." и приведите пример.

例: I prefer reading on paper because I find it less tiring and easier to focus. For example, when I read novels on paper I can concentrate for longer without eye strain.

提案: Отвечайте сначала прямо на вопрос, затем поясните с примером. Используйте связующие слова (for example, when, because) и конкретизируйте ситуации: когда нужно читать внимательно и когда можно просмотреть быстро. Избегайте абстрактных фраз без примеров.

例: It depends on the purpose. For example, I read carefully when studying for exams because missing details affects my grades, but I skim news articles when I just want the main idea.

提案: Дайте прямой ответ, затем объясните причину с конкретным примером. Используйте корректную лексику: "detailed reading" вместо "detailing reading" и избегайте междометий. Поясните, в каких ситуациях вы выбираете детальное чтение.

例: I prefer detailed reading because I like to fully understand the text. For instance, when I read academic articles I take notes and read slowly to grasp the main arguments.

× I think I like reading UH because sometimes I reading a book my teacher forces for me reading a book.

✓ I think I like reading because sometimes I read a book my teacher makes me read.

The student uses incorrect verb forms: 'reading' instead of present simple 'read' and 'forces for me reading' is ungrammatical. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I read' and the causative construction 'makes me read' or 'forces me to read'. Also remove filler 'UH'. Suggestion: practice subject + base verb (I read) for habitual actions and use correct causative verbs ('make/force someone to do something').

× I prefer to read on paper because read on paper is more interested than read on screen.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because reading on paper is more interesting than reading on a screen.

The student used 'interested' (an adjective describing feelings) instead of 'interesting' (describing something that causes interest). Also verb forms are missing: use gerund 'reading' as noun. Include the article 'a' before 'screen' for generic singular nouns. Suggestion: use gerund when talking about activities and choose 'interesting' to describe things that interest people.

× Umm, and read on the screen is lose my vision.

✓ Umm, and reading on the screen makes me lose my vision.

Problems: missing gerund 'reading' and wrong verb structure 'is lose'; should be 'makes me lose' to express cause. Also 'lose my vision' is acceptable but 'strain my eyes' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'reading on the screen makes me lose my vision' or 'reading on a screen strains my eyes'.

× You don't always need the same level of careful reading. What matters is your goal and then consequences of missing something.

✓ You don't always need the same level of careful reading. What matters are your goal and the consequences of missing something.

Subject-verb agreement: 'What matters' followed by plural items requires plural verb 'are'. Also add article 'the' before 'consequences' for specificity. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with the following noun phrase; use 'is' for singular, 'are' for plural.

× I prefer detailing reading because it's more interested and correctly, uh, understanding.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it's more interesting and helps me understand correctly.

Errors: 'detailing reading' wrong word order and form — use adjective 'detailed' before noun 'reading' or gerund 'detailed reading'. 'Interested' should be 'interesting' to describe the reading, and 'correctly, uh, understanding' is ungrammatical; use 'helps me understand correctly.' Suggestion: use adjective+noun order and pair verbs with appropriate complements: 'helps me understand' or 'allows me to understand correctly.'