Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, also) to connect ideas. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, I read research papers related to my profession to improve my knowledge, and I also like novels for relaxation. Additionally, reading helps me learn new vocabulary and ideas.

提案: Structure the answer: give a clear preference, then explain with specific reasons and one brief example. Fix grammar and redundancy (e.g., 'when I when I'm'). Use linking words like 'however' or 'when' to contrast. Keep it within 3 sentences.

例: I usually prefer reading books on paper at home because I enjoy the tactile feel and find it easier to concentrate. However, when I travel by bus or car, I use my tablet or phone for convenience. This way I can read in both situations.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence answering both parts (when careful vs when casual), then provide a specific example. Clarify vocabulary (e.g., 'legal' or 'financial' matters, not 'leaker'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'but'. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

例: You need to read carefully when dealing with legal or financial documents, for example, before signing a bank contract, because small details can have big consequences. But for casual things like social media posts or simple emails, a quick skim is usually enough.

提案: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give concise reasons and a brief example. Improve grammar and choice of phrases (e.g., 'become aware of the problem'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex information and spot problems. For example, when I read academic papers I read slowly and take notes so I don't miss important points.

× Of course, I do like reading because I can improve my knowledge when I'm reading.

✓ Of course, I like reading because I can improve my knowledge when I read.

The original uses both 'do like' (emphatic) which is acceptable but awkward here, and 'when I'm reading' which is less natural than the simple present 'when I read' for habitual actions. Use the simple present tense for regular habits: 'I like' and 'when I read.' Suggestion: Use simple present to describe habitual actions: 'I like reading because I can improve my knowledge when I read.'

× I can give you example if you have a research paper relate your career occupation so you can read it and you can improve your knowledge and I like read novels it it makes.

✓ I can give you an example: if you have a research paper related to your occupation, you can read it and improve your knowledge. I also like to read novels because they are enjoyable.

Multiple issues: missing article 'an' before 'example', incorrect verb form 'relate' instead of past participle 'related', missing preposition 'to' after 'related', awkward run-on sentence and incorrect verb form 'like read' which should be 'like to read'. Break into two clear sentences and use correct forms. Suggestion: Add articles, use past participle for adjectives (related to), and use 'like to read' or 'like reading.'

× If I'm going somewhere when I'm the bus or car, I like to use my tablet or mobile phone.

✓ If I'm going somewhere by bus or car, I like to use my tablet or mobile phone.

Use the preposition 'by' to indicate means of transport ('by bus'/'by car'). The original 'when I'm the bus or car' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'by' + transport, and simplify: 'If I'm going somewhere by bus or car...'.

× If not when I when I'm the home and if I have a free time, I just like to read on paper or book.

✓ If not, when I'm at home and I have free time, I like to read on paper or read a book.

Problems: missing preposition 'at' for locations ('at home'), unnecessary articles ('a free time' should be 'free time'), and awkward word order. Also 'read on paper or book' is unclear—use 'read on paper' or 'read a book.' Suggestion: Use 'at home', 'free time' (no article), and parallel verbs: 'read on paper or read a book.'

× So I just want to feel that thing. I'm reading a book so.

✓ I just want to feel the experience of reading a book.

The original contains unclear phrasing and sentence fragments ('I'm reading a book so'). Combine ideas into a single clear sentence and use 'the experience of reading' to express the feeling. Suggestion: Avoid fragments and vague words like 'that thing.'

× If you are dealing with some leaker matter and you have clearly read all the information before you are going to sign in the bank or something, you have to clearly and be careful when you are reading the old information, old conditions.

✓ If you are dealing with a legal or important matter and you have to sign at the bank, you should read all the information carefully and be careful when reading the old terms and conditions.

Multiple issues: 'some leaker matter' is incorrect—likely 'legal or important matter'; article use and word choice are wrong. 'Sign in the bank' should be 'sign at the bank' or 'sign documents at the bank.' 'You have to clearly and be careful' is ungrammatical; use 'read carefully and be careful.' 'Old information, old conditions' is better as 'old terms and conditions.' Suggestion: Choose correct nouns ('legal matter'), use appropriate prepositions ('sign at'), and place adverbs properly ('read carefully').

× Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

✓ Do you prefer skimming or detailed reading?

The student's question from the examiner uses 'scanning' which is acceptable, but in context the common contrast is 'skimming' vs 'detailed reading.' Suggestion: Use the common terms 'skimming' (quick reading) and 'detailed reading.'

× I just like to do the detailed reading because I can get more information and I can make aware regarding the problem.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I can get more information and become more aware of the problem.

Use 'prefer' or 'I like' consistently; 'make aware regarding the problem' is incorrect—use 'become aware of' or 'become more aware of the problem.' Suggestion: Use 'prefer detailed reading' and the verb phrase 'become aware of.'

× So if I'm reading a detailed paper or something, I'm just OK with that because I can get enough information.

✓ So if I'm reading a detailed paper, I'm fine with that because I can get enough information.

'I'm just OK with that' is conversational but acceptable; replace with 'I'm fine with that' for clarity. The tense 'I'm reading' is fine for a hypothetical situation; no change needed except streamline phrasing. Suggestion: Use concise expressions like 'I'm fine with that.'