Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, pronunciation of key words, and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., 'have time', 'read', 'fiction', 'comic books'). Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and add one specific detail using a linking word. Also avoid filler words and repetition.

例: Yes, I do. I usually read fiction or comic books when I have free time, because they help me relax after a busy day.

提案: Fix vocabulary and word choice errors and use linking words for coherence. Replace incorrect words ('leading', 'orange skin', 'bleeding') with correct ones ('reading', 'e-reader' or 'on a screen', 'comfortable'). Provide one clear reason then add a specific example. Keep within 1–3 sentences for clarity.

例: I prefer reading on a screen, such as an e-reader, because it is more convenient and portable; for example, I can carry hundreds of books on one device and adjust the font size and backlight for comfortable reading.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar: use correct prepositions and verb forms ('lessons from university', 'need to concentrate'). Use linking words to contrast situations ('but', 'however') and give a clear topic sentence followed by a specific example. Limit to a few clear sentences.

例: I need to read carefully when I study university lessons, especially before midterm or final exams, because I must understand details and remember facts. However, I do not read carefully when I look at magazines or comic books, since those are mainly for enjoyment.

提案: Correct word choice and contrast structure: replace 'impotence' with 'important' and 'read more roughly' with 'read in detail'. Use a linking word ('but' is fine) and give one specific example of when you scan vs. read in detail. Keep answer concise and natural.

例: Mostly I scan texts to get the main ideas, but for important study material or exam preparation I read in detail to remember facts and understand concepts, for example when reviewing lecture notes before a test.

× Yes I do if I have a time.

✓ Yes, I do if I have time.

Remove the article 'a' before 'time' because 'time' in this context is uncountable; also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech. Use 'have time' to indicate availability.

× I usually lead the fiction or maybe a cartoon book.

✓ I usually read fiction or maybe a comic book.

The verb 'lead' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'read' (present tense). 'Fiction' does not need 'the' here; use 'comic book' instead of 'cartoon book'. This corrects verb choice and article usage.

× I prefer leading orange skin because it's more convenient and portable.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable.

Replace 'leading' with 'reading' (verb + -ing form) and correct 'orange skin' (nonsense) to 'on a screen' to answer the question about paper vs screen. The gerund 'reading' after 'prefer' is appropriate.

× I can carry many books on one device and lead anywhere.

✓ I can carry many books on one device and read anywhere.

Replace 'lead' with 'read'; 'lead' is the wrong verb. 'Read anywhere' expresses the intended meaning.

× I also like that I can adjust the text size and lighting which make bleeding more comfortable.

✓ I also like that I can adjust the text size and lighting, which make reading more comfortable.

Replace 'bleeding' with 'reading' (wrong word) and add a comma before the relative clause. 'Make' agrees with the plural subject 'text size and lighting'.

× When I read the lesson form university ensures concentrate with this because it's it's have the exam like final and midterm exam so I usually.

✓ When I read university lessons, I concentrate because we have exams like finals and midterms, so I usually read the lectures carefully.

This sentence had many problems: word choices ('form' -> 'from'/'university lessons'), incorrect structure, repeated 'it's', wrong verb forms ('have the exam' -> 'we have exams'), and sentence fragments. The corrected version organizes ideas logically: time/context, reason, and result; uses plural nouns 'finals and midterms' and 'lectures', and proper verb forms.

× Read the lecture carefully, more than the vision or comic book.

✓ I read the lectures carefully, more so than novels or comic books.

Use 'lectures' plural to match context and 'more so than' to compare reading seriousness. 'Vision' is incorrect word choice; 'novels' fits better as a comparison. Also maintain parallel plural forms 'comic books'.

× Mostly I scan text to get main ideas, but for impotence study material or exam preparation I read more roughly to remember facts and understand concepts.

✓ Mostly I scan texts to get main ideas, but for important study material or exam preparation I read more thoroughly to remember facts and understand concepts.

Replace 'impotence' (wrong word) with 'important'. Use plural 'texts' or 'text' consistently; 'more roughly' is awkward—use 'more thoroughly' to indicate careful reading. This corrects word choice and adverb use.