Keys— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and directly answer, then give one clear supporting detail. Avoid contradictory or unclear phrasing (e.g. "at the same times I also lost it"). Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (e.g. tense and articles).

例: Yes, I usually carry several keys with me because I need them for home, my motorcycle and my office. However, this causes problems sometimes, because I often misplace them. Therefore, I try to keep them together on a single key ring to reduce the chance of losing any.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details and a brief consequence or attempt to solve. Fix grammar (use correct nouns, verb forms) and cut redundancy. Use linking words like "although" or "so" correctly.

例: Yes, I have lost my keys several times. Although I keep them on a key ring, I still misplace them frequently, which is very frustrating. As a result, I am trying to develop a routine of always putting them in the same pocket to prevent future loss.

提案: Good structure: direct answer and solution. Improve naturalness by using clearer phrasing and fewer repetitions. Use linking words (e.g. "so", "therefore") correctly and give one specific example of how this helps you.

例: Yes, I sometimes forget my keys, particularly my motorcycle key. Therefore, I have a duplicate made and keep it in a separate safe place; this has helped me avoid being locked out several times.

提案: Answer clearly and politely, then give a concise reason and an alternative. Avoid informal fillers ("MMM") and grammatical errors (subject-verb agreement, gerunds). Use linking words like "because" and "instead" for coherence.

例: No, I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour because they may be busy or uncomfortable holding them. Instead, I prefer to keep a spare key in a secure place at home or use a lockbox with a code.

× Yes I do, I always bring those keys with me and at the same times I also lost it and I think this is one of the most complicated things I hate the most.

✓ Yes, I do. I always bring those keys with me, but sometimes I also lose them, and I think this is one of the most troublesome things I hate the most.

Errors: 'at the same times' is incorrect phrase and should be 'sometimes'; 'lost' is past tense where present simple 'lose' fits recurring action; 'it' is wrong pronoun for plural 'keys' so use 'them'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for occasional actions, use present simple for habitual actions, and match pronoun number to noun (them for plural).

× Yes, this is one of my most complicated problem and I really frustrating because I often lost my keys even though I try to keep it as a bunch of keys as a key ring, but I still lose it. So I until now I still couldn't find any solutions that help me to solve this kind of problem.

✓ Yes, this is one of my most complicated problems and I am really frustrated because I often lose my keys even though I try to keep them together on a key ring, but I still lose them. So until now I still haven't found any solution that helps me solve this kind of problem.

Errors: 'problem' should be plural 'problems' after 'one of my'; 'frustrating' (adjective) should be 'frustrated' (feeling); 'lost' past tense should be present 'lose' for habitual action; pronoun 'it' wrong for plural 'keys' so 'them'; 'a bunch of keys as a key ring' awkward — use 'together on a key ring'; 'couldn't find' wrong tense and modal — use 'haven't found'; 'any solutions that help me to solve' -> 'any solution that helps me solve'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb number agreement, use correct tense for ongoing situations (present perfect), match pronouns to nouns, and simplify phrases for clarity.

× Yes, I often forget my keys, especially my motor keys. So in order to avoid this kind of problem I copy the key like duplicated another one, so if I lose I can use another one to replace it. This kind of solution can help me a lot.

✓ Yes, I often forget my keys, especially my motorcycle keys. So, to avoid this kind of problem I have a copy of the key, a duplicate, so if I lose one I can use the other to replace it. This solution helps me a lot.

Errors: 'motor keys' is unclear — use 'motorcycle keys'; 'I copy the key like duplicated another one' is ungrammatical — use 'I have a copy of the key' or 'I make a duplicate'; 'if I lose' needs object 'one' to refer to a key; 'can help me a lot' is okay but present simple 'helps me a lot' fits habitual result. Suggestions: use natural noun phrases, correct verb forms (have a copy/make a duplicate), and ensure referents are explicit (one/the other).

× MMM no I didn't think it's a good idea because sometimes the neighbor they also have their own things to do. So in order to not boring our neighbors I think maybe I have to keep the keys in a safe place so it won't interrupting others.

✓ No, I don't think it's a good idea because neighbors sometimes have their own things to do. So, to avoid bothering our neighbors I think I have to keep the keys in a safe place so they won't be disturbed.

Errors: 'MMM' and informal fillers removed; 'I didn't think' wrong tense — present opinion uses 'I don't think'; 'the neighbor they also have' has redundant pronoun 'they' and incorrect article — use 'neighbors' plural; 'in order to not boring' should be 'to avoid bothering' (use gerund after 'avoid'); 'so it won't interrupting others' is ungrammatical — use 'so they won't be disturbed' or 'so as not to disturb others'. Suggestions: use correct tense for current opinions, avoid redundant pronouns, use 'avoid' + gerund, and use passive or active structures correctly to express not disturbing others.