Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / however). Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct subject-verb agreement and tense errors.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient on my smartphone. For example, I usually type messages and make shopping lists on my phone, but I sometimes write notes by hand when I want to remember things better.

提案: Give a direct answer first and reduce hesitation. Use one clear sentence to state when and why you type, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. Remove repeated words and filler sounds.

例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every evening when I come home from work because I use it to study and prepare assignments. For instance, I usually make to-do lists and finish coursework online after dinner.

提案: Provide a concise time reference and one clear supporting detail. Avoid repeating phrases and correct grammar (e.g., "I learned to type during college" not "I learned typing"). Use linking words like "when" or "because" to connect ideas.

例: I learned to type when I started college during my undergraduate studies. At that time I used Excel for assignments, so I practiced typing a lot to complete online tasks.

提案: Answer directly and give one or two specific methods with linking words. Correct verbs and remove repetition (e.g., "I improve my typing by practising daily"). Mention measurable or concrete steps, such as using typing websites or timed practice.

例: I improve my typing by practising daily, mainly by typing messages and documents on my phone and laptop. In addition, I use online typing tools and timed exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× But mostly I prefer typing because right now in the technological era everybody have a phone so I also have a smartphone.

✓ But mostly I prefer typing because right now in the technological era everybody has a phone so I also have a smartphone.

The subject 'everybody' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' not 'have'. Use 'everybody has' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× So I always prefer typing to send messages and like making any list.

✓ So I always prefer typing to send messages and to make any list.

Parallel structure requires the infinitive 'to make' to match 'to send'. Using 'making' breaks parallelism; use 'to make' for consistent verb forms after 'prefer ... to'.

× But when I got a chance to, I make the handwriting notes as well on paper.

✓ But when I get a chance, I make handwritten notes on paper as well.

The sentence mixes past 'got' with present 'make'. Context implies a habitual action so use present 'get'. Also 'handwritten notes' is the correct adjective+noun form.

× Uh, yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day in the evening when I, uh, come back from my work and I make the list and, uh, I do some studies and then I, uh, then I use the keyboard, uh, laptop keyboard, uh, for the typing and I have to make some assignments on that.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every evening when I come back from work; I make lists, study, and then use the laptop keyboard for typing and doing assignments.

Original has repetition and awkward phrases. 'Come' is correct for first person present. Use plural 'lists' and concise phrasing. 'For the typing' is unnecessary; use 'for typing'. Ensure verbs are consistent present tense.

× I remembered I learned, uh, I learned, uh, typing on keyboard, uh, during my graduation when I started my college.

✓ I remember I learned typing on the keyboard during my degree when I started college.

If referring to a present memory, use present 'remember' not 'remembered'. 'Graduation' is incorrect for the study period; use 'degree' or 'during my studies' and 'college' without 'my' before 'college' can be optional. Use 'the keyboard'.

× So at that time I, uh, learned the Ms. Excel, so in which I typing all the, uh, files.

✓ So at that time I learned MS Excel, in which I typed all the files.

Use 'learned MS Excel' and past tense 'typed' to match completed action. 'In which I typed all the files' is better than 'in which I typing' (wrong verb form). Also 'the Ms. Excel' is incorrect article use.

× So, and I got the assignments that is online.

✓ I received assignments that were online.

Use past tense 'received' and plural agreement 'assignments that were online'. 'That is online' mixes singular verb with plural noun; correct subject-verb agreement and tense.

× So I use the typing keyboard on that time.

✓ So I used the keyboard at that time.

Use past tense 'used' and the preposition 'at that time' rather than 'on that time'. Also 'typing keyboard' is redundant; 'keyboard' suffices.

× Well day-to-day I typing I improve my typing to typing more and more like sending messages and sending some files to other persons or sometimes I use the online typing tools which are which increase my speed to typing fast and improve it.

✓ Day to day I improve my typing by practicing more, such as sending messages and files to other people, and sometimes I use online typing tools that increase my speed and help me improve.

Replace incorrect 'I typing' with 'I improve my typing by practicing'. Use 'other people' not 'other persons'. Use relative clause 'that increase my speed' and avoid 'to typing fast'. Ensure verbs are in correct forms and sentence is concise.