Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で分かりやすいですが、文法と表現が不自然です。具体的には “write down highlighting” は誤用で、代わりに “highlight points” や “make highlights” などを使うべきです。また、理由を一つか二つの具体例で補強し、リンク語（because, so, for example）を使って論理を明確にしてください。文は5文以内に収め、冗長な語は避けましょう。

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes I usually highlight key points and write short summaries in the margins, which makes revision easier.

提案: 答えが繰り返しで途切れており、流暢さと文法が低いです。質問に対してはまず短く明確に答え（No, I don't）その後理由や頻度を示す具体例を一文か二文で付け加えてください。冗長な繰り返しを避け、接続詞（because, so, usually）で文をつなぐと良いです。

例: No, I don't type on a laptop keyboard every day. I usually use my phone or write by hand, so I only type a few times a week when I need to send emails or write reports.

提案: 回答は断片的で意味が分かりにくく、語彙と文法の誤りが多いです。“a elementary” は誤りで “elementary” の前は “an” を使います。また、不要な音声（MMM）や無関係なフレーズ（I was lying there）を避け、明確な時期と簡単な背景説明を加えてください。接続語（when, so, because）を使うと自然になります。

例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. My teacher taught us basic typing skills, so I practiced regularly using simple exercises and school computers.

提案: 内容は伝わりますが、語法と語順が不自然です。“application of typing” や “services of application” は誤りで、正しくは “a typing app” や “a typing service” です。繰り返しも多いので、アプリ名を一度挙げて、どのように使っているか具体例（練習頻度や練習内容）を付け加えてください。

例: I improve my typing by using a typing app called Sushida. I practice on it for about 20 minutes every day, focusing on accuracy and speed with its drills and lessons.

× I prefer handwriting because I often write down highlighting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I often write highlights down.

The phrase 'write down highlighting' is ungrammatical in English. 'Highlighting' is a gerund meaning the action of highlighting; here the student likely means 'highlights' (nouns) or 'highlighted points'. Use 'write highlights down' or 'write down highlights' to mean note key points. Suggestion: say 'I often write highlights down' or 'I often write things down' to be clear.

× No, I. I type on. I don't type on laptop keyboard every day. Actually I have a laptop but I don't type every day.

✓ No. I don't type on a laptop keyboard every day. Actually, I have a laptop, but I don't use it to type every day.

The original contains sentence fragments and missing articles. 'I don't type on laptop keyboard' needs the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Also 'type every day' is acceptable but contextually clearer to say 'use it to type every day.' Avoid fragments like 'No, I. I type on.' Make complete sentences and include necessary articles.

× When I was a elementary school student. MMM. I was lying there. That using.

✓ When I was an elementary school student, I learned to type there.

Multiple errors: 'a elementary' should be 'an elementary' (article with vowel sound). The fragments 'I was lying there. That using.' are incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I learned to type there' which uses past tense 'learned' to match 'When I was...'. Ensure one complete sentence and correct article.

× I often use application of typing.

✓ I often use a typing application.

'Application of typing' is awkward and ungrammatical. In English, we say 'a typing application' or 'a typing app.' Use the noun phrase 'typing application' and include the article 'a.'

× I often use Sushida. Sushida is a services of application.

✓ I often use Sushida. Sushida is a typing application service.

'a services of application' is incorrect: 'services' is plural and 'of application' is wrong order. Use 'a typing application service' or 'a typing service application.' Also include the article 'a' if describing one service. This clarifies that Sushida is a service/app for typing.