Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Corrija a pergunta repetida e melhore a fluência e a precisão. Pratique responder diretamente ao tópico com uma frase-tópico clara, mantendo no máximo 5 frases. Use vocabulário apropriado (por exemplo, "take photos" em vez de "talking pictures") e evite erros gramaticais. Dê uma opinião seguida de uma razão breve e um exemplo específico. Conecte ideias com palavras de ligação como "because", "so" ou "for example".

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture unique moments. For example, I like photographing sunsets in the countryside because the colors are very vivid. I also take pictures of city skylines at night to show contrast between lights and darkness.

提案: Melhore a clareza, pronúncia e gramática. Responda diretamente com uma frase-tópico clara: diga qual prefere e por que. Use vocabulário correto (por exemplo, "peace and quiet", "scenery", "relaxing") e mantenha frases curtas e conectadas. Corrija tempos e artigos (the/a) e estrutura sujeita-verbo. Dê um exemplo específico e evite palavras confusas.

例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the peace and quiet and the beautiful scenery. For example, fields and hills feel very relaxing, especially at sunset. I often take photos of winding paths and old trees because they look peaceful and timeless.

提案: Organize a clear response: diga primeiro sua preferência (own country or other countries), depois explique com razões específicas. Use vocabulário correto ("different countries", "native plants/flowers", "memories") e corrija a gramática e a estrutura das frases. Evite repetir palavras e forneça um exemplo concreto. Use conectores como "because" e "for example".

例: I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of childhood memories and native plants I grew up with. For example, Brazilian beaches and rainforests have unique flowers and colors I love to photograph. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries to capture different landscapes and cultures.

× Do you like talking pictures of different views?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

The student used the incorrect verb form 'talking' instead of 'taking'. The correct verb is 'take' when referring to capturing photographs. Suggestion: use 'take pictures' or 'taking pictures' depending on sentence structure.

× So I prefer rural views because I love the January and the pace a team of sari there are plenty everywhere and the landscape and very relaxation.

✓ I prefer rural views because I love the peaceful atmosphere, the scenery, and the relaxed pace of life there.

This sentence has multiple issues: wrong word choice ('January' likely intended 'quiet' or 'nature'), incorrect phrases ('pace a team of sari'), and poor structure. Suggestion: simplify and use clear nouns and adjectives: 'peaceful atmosphere', 'scenery', 'relaxed pace of life'. Ensure subject and verbs are clear and avoid listing with 'and' without parallel structure.

× I all I also like take pictures of windows entry special at sunset.

✓ I also like taking pictures of windows, especially at sunset.

The verb after 'like' should be in the -ing form: 'like taking'. 'Entry special' is incorrect word order and choice; 'especially' is the correct adverb. Suggestion: use 'especially' before the time expression and use commas to separate items.

× I love the views in my country so and different countries always because I have different natural natural flowers and many memories.

✓ I love the views in my country and in other countries because there are many different native flowers and I have many memories there.

Problems include redundant words ('natural natural'), incorrect connectors ('so and different countries always'), and unclear noun phrases. Suggestion: use 'and' to connect 'in my country and in other countries', use 'native' or 'local' before 'flowers', and place 'there' to indicate location.

× So I like to to make a video for pictures and my country is Brazilian in Portugal.

✓ So I like to make videos and take pictures; I am Brazilian and currently in Portugal.

Errors: duplicated 'to', incorrect preposition 'for' with 'pictures', and unclear nationality/location phrasing. Suggestion: use 'make videos and take pictures' for activities, and separate nationality ('I am Brazilian') from location ('in Portugal').