Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct but very brief and repetitive. Add a brief topic sentence followed by specific reasons or examples using linking words to make it more natural and informative. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, I like photographing sunsets and city skylines, as the changing light creates interesting contrasts. Also, taking photos lets me remember places and share them with friends.

提案: The answer is clear but needs expansion with supporting details and a linking word to improve coherence. Explain what aspects of urban views you like and give a short example or comparison to rural views.

例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the variety of architecture and bustling street scenes. For instance, I like capturing reflections on glass buildings and colorful markets, whereas rural views are calmer but less diverse in textures and shapes.

提案: Good direct response with a reason, but 'versatile' is vague. Be more specific about what makes foreign views attractive and add an example or brief comparison. Use a linking word to connect your reason and example.

例: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they offer different cultures and architectural styles that I don't see at home. For example, when I visited Italy I loved photographing narrow cobbled streets and ornate churches, which felt very different from the urban scenes in my country.

× 'Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views.'

✓ 'Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views.'

'No correction needed. The gerund "taking" correctly follows the verb like and "taking pictures" is a correct noun phrase. Keep as is.'

× 'I prefer views in urban areas.'

✓ 'I prefer views in urban areas.'

'No correction needed. The verb prefer is correctly followed by a noun phrase (views). The sentence is grammatical and fits the question.'

× 'I prefer taking views in other countries because they are more versatile and beautiful.'

✓ 'I prefer views in other countries because they are more varied and beautiful.'

'Issue: choosing the best collocation and adjective. "Taking views" is unnatural in English; we usually say "taking pictures of views" or simply "views" after prefer. "Versatile" is not the correct adjective to describe scenery; use "varied". Correction replaces "taking views" with "views" and "versatile" with "varied". Suggestion: say "I prefer taking pictures of views in other countries" if you want to emphasize photographing, or "I prefer views in other countries" to refer to scenery.'