Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more complete, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "it has good quality" → "it has good quality" or better: "because it takes high-quality photos"). Avoid trailing off; finish your thought (e.g., explain what you do when you miss a place).

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially when I travel to new places. For example, I always take my DSLR because it takes high-quality pictures, and later I look at them to remember the trip.

提案: Be fluent, avoid filler words and repetition, and use correct verb forms. Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because," "for example"). Mention concrete activities and correct grammar ("I like going with my family and enjoying the animals").

例: I prefer rural views because they help me relax and feel closer to nature. For example, I enjoy walking with my family, observing wildlife, and listening to birds because it is peaceful and refreshing.

提案: Make the response grammatically correct and slightly more specific. Use plural forms correctly ("other countries") and add linking words to expand. Give one concrete example of what you discover or learn about other cultures to make the answer more vivid.

例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and meeting people from different cultures. For instance, when I visited Japan I loved seeing the contrast between traditional gardens and modern cityscapes, and I learned a lot about local customs.

× I do that with my camera because it's have a good quality.

✓ I do that with my camera because it has good quality.

The sentence uses 'it's have' which mixes a contraction of 'it is' with the base verb 'have' incorrectly. The correct present-tense form for third-person singular is 'has'. Also 'good quality' does not need the article 'a' here. Suggestion: use 'it has good quality' or better 'it is high quality'.

× When I miss the place, I.

✓ When I miss a place, I feel sad.

The original fragment is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object. 'Miss the place' is unclear; use 'miss a place' or specify which place. Provide a complete clause after the comma. Suggestion: finish the sentence with an appropriate verb and object, e.g. 'I feel sad' or 'I think about it'.

× I prefer uh rural areas because I feel relaxed when I watch the nature and I liked go go in with my family and enjoyed with the animals and meet our our our.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I feel relaxed when I look at nature, and I like going there with my family, enjoying the animals, and meeting people.

Multiple issues: 'watch the nature' should be 'look at nature' (preposition use). 'I liked go go in' mixes past and base forms and repeats words; correct present preference is 'I like going'. 'Enjoyed with the animals' uses wrong verb form and preposition; use 'enjoying the animals'. Repetition 'our our our' is unclear; replace with 'people' or 'locals'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and correct prepositions: 'look at', 'go to/going there', 'enjoying', 'meeting people'.

× I prefer views in other country because I love to see and discover new areas and meet other people, others people with a different culture.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I love to see and discover new places and meet other people from different cultures.

'in other country' should be plural 'in other countries' or 'in another country'. 'New areas' is acceptable but 'new places' is more natural. 'Others people' is incorrect; use 'other people' and add 'from' to indicate origin: 'from different cultures'. Suggestion: use plural forms and correct prepositions: 'in other countries', 'people from different cultures'.

× I like to do that.

✓ I like to do that.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It expresses a habitual preference in the present tense using the base verb 'like' with the infinitive 'to do'. No change is needed.