Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然且语法正确的句子来回答，开头直接回应问题，然后用一到两句具体细节支撑。注意动词形式、冠词和复数形式，避免重复表达。例如把“take picture”改为“taking pictures”，把“difficult views”改为合适的词（如“dramatic views”或“scenic views”），并把“it can helps”改为“it helps”。可以使用连接词（for example, because, which）使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of scenic views. For example, I often photograph high mountains and long rivers because they look dramatic and evoke strong memories. I also share these photos with friends online so they can see places I have visited.

提案: 回答要直接且逻辑清晰。先用一句话总括你的偏好（或说明没有固定偏好），再用1–2句举具体例子并用连接词衔接。注意词语搭配（urban area, rural area, high buildings, countryside）和语法（主谓一致，冠词）。避免自相矛盾的表述，如把城市和乡村混淆。

例: I don’t have a fixed preference; it depends on my mood. For example, when I want peace I prefer the countryside with mountains and rivers, but when I want culture and architecture I prefer urban areas with tall buildings and historic sites.

提案: 先给出明确的总体回答，然后用一两句具体原因支持。注意语法（prefer views in my country, my country has a long history）和词汇选择（learn about different histories, meet new people/experience new cultures）。避免不清晰的词如“difficult history”和不完整表达“meet new”。

例: I sometimes prefer views in my own country because it has a long history and many beautiful landmarks I know well. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries because they allow me to learn about different histories and experience new cultures and people.

× Yes, I like take picture or difficult views, especially beautiful things, for example high mountain and long river.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially beautiful things, for example high mountains and long rivers.

句中動詞 like 後應接動名詞（-ing），因此應為 taking。picture 應為複數 pictures，因為泛指多張照片；of different views 用來表達「不同的景色」。high mountain 和 long river 需用複數且加冠詞或形容詞修飾，改為 high mountains 和 long rivers。建議記住：like、enjoy 等動詞後面常接動名詞表習慣性動作；名詞在泛指可數複數要一致。

× It can help me remember beautiful things and it can helps me share the photo with my friends online.

✓ It can help me remember beautiful things and it can help me share the photos with my friends online.

第二個並列的動詞結構應與前一部分平行，用 help 而不是 helps（主語仍為 it）。helps 是第三人稱單數現在式，與前面 can 搭配不正確。photo 應為複數 photos，因為前文泛指多張照片。建議保持並列結構一致，注意助動詞後動詞用原形，名詞單複數一致。

× It depends on my mind some. Sometimes I like rural urban areas.

✓ It depends on my mood sometimes. Sometimes I like urban areas and sometimes rural areas.

原句語序和詞語選用不當。中文表達『視心情而定』應為 depends on my mood，some 用法不合適。rural urban areas 同時出現造成矛盾，應分開表達：有時喜歡城市（urban areas），有時喜歡鄉村（rural areas）。建議學習常用搭配 like urban areas / rural areas 並注意副詞 sometimes 的位置。

× I like some country and high mountain, long river.

✓ I like the countryside, high mountains, and long rivers.

some country 用法不自然，應用 the countryside 或 country life 表示鄉村。high mountain, long river 需使用複數並加連接詞 and，且可加定冠詞或不加視語境而定。建議練習常見名詞搭配及冠詞用法，區分可數單複數與集合名詞（the countryside）。

× Sometimes I like rural area. I like high building and beautiful history.

✓ Sometimes I like rural areas. I like tall buildings and historical sites.

rural area 應用複數 rural areas 以呼應泛指。high building 用法不正確，應為 tall buildings（高樓）或 high-rise buildings；beautiful history 表達不恰當，應用 historical sites 或 beautiful historical places 表示有歷史的美麗景點。建議學習形容詞與名詞的常見搭配（例如 tall buildings, historical sites）。

× Sometimes I prefer view my country because my country have long history and some beautiful things, but other time I prefer other country because it can let me know difficult history and meet new.

✓ Sometimes I prefer views in my country because my country has a long history and many beautiful things, but other times I prefer other countries because they let me learn about different histories and meet new people.

prefer view my country 應為 prefer views in my country 或 prefer my country 的表達；have 應改為 has（主語 my country 為第三人稱單數）；some beautiful things 改為 many beautiful things 表達較自然；other time 應為 other times；prefer other country 應為 prefer other countries（複數或加 the）；it can let me know difficult history and meet new 用法不通順，改為 they let me learn about different histories and meet new people（讓我了解不同的歷史並結識新人）。建議注意主謂一致（has）、時態與常用動詞搭配（learn about, meet people）。