Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap anlaşılır olmaktan uzak ve bir tutarsızlık içeriyor. Konu fotoğraf çekimi iken “Peaches” (şeftali) kelimesi yer almış; bu muhtemelen yanlış kelime seçimidir. Doğrudan soruya başlayın (evet/hayır), ardından kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun ve 1–2 destekleyici detay verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak akışı iyileştirin. Cümle sayısını 3–4'te tutun ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like capturing landscapes because they show changing light and colors, which makes each photo unique. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines when I travel.

提案: Cümlelerde kelime hataları ve tekrarlar var (“wheels” yanlış kelime). Ayrıca bağlaçların yanlış kullanımı ve açıklama eksikliği bulunuyor. Net bir tercih belirtin, ardından sebebinizi 1–2 kısa cümleyle açıklayın; bağlaçlarla mantıksal akışı sağlayın. Spesifik örnekler ekleyin.

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. The variety of buildings and busy streets gives me interesting subjects to photograph, such as modern skyscrapers or colorful markets.

提案: Cevap kısa ve genel; geliştirme için sebep ve örnek eklemelisiniz. Önce net bir görüş verin, sonra nedenini açıklayın ve bir karşılaştırma veya örnek verin. Dilbilgisine dikkat edin (my country's views are better).

例: I generally prefer the views in my own country because the landscapes and cultural sites are familiar to me. For instance, the coastal cliffs and traditional villages here offer a unique atmosphere that I don't often find abroad.

× I like Peaches and different views, so I both like this.

✓ I like peaches and different views, so I like both.

The student used 'both like this' incorrectly. 'Both' should modify two items together and is placed before the verb or before the nouns ('I like both'). Also 'Peaches' should be lowercase as a common noun. Suggestion: say 'I like peaches and different views, so I like both.' Grammar problem type ID: 16

× I prefer wheels in urban because I prefer this views. Because it's different and effective for me.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I prefer these views; they are different and interesting to me.

Multiple issues: 'wheels' is the wrong noun — context requires 'views'. 'urban' needs the noun 'areas' after it. 'this views' mixes singular demonstrative with plural noun; use 'these views'. The short sentence 'Because it's...' should not start with 'Because' as a fragment; combine sentences and match number: 'they are' for plural. 'effective' is awkward; 'interesting' or 'appealing' fits better. Suggestions: use correct noun, match demonstrative and number, avoid sentence fragments. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Actually, I think my country's views is better.

✓ Actually, I think my country's views are better.

The subject 'views' is plural, so the verb must be plural: 'are' not 'is'. Alternatively, if speaking of 'the view', use singular: 'my country's view is better.' Ensure subject-verb agreement between 'views' and the verb. Suggestion: decide singular or plural and match the verb accordingly. Grammar problem type ID: 27