Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ошибка: студент неправильно повторил слово «views» как «youths», что меняет смысл. Речь неестественна и показывает понимание неверного лексического выбора. Рекомендуется слушать внимательно, уточнять непонятые слова, и использовать краткий ясный ответ (топик-сентенс), затем одно-два уточняющих предложения с подходящей лексикой.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I like capturing cityscapes at sunset because the light creates interesting contrasts, and I also take pictures of natural landscapes when I travel to the countryside.

提案: Ошибка в структуре и словоупотреблении: ответ начинается с повтора вопроса. Нужен прямой топик-сентенс, затем поддержка. Фраза «it's more... bigger» нечеткая и содержит заполнители («umm»). Рекомендуется сформулировать ясную причину и привести конкретный пример, использовать связующие слова (for example, because, also).

例: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of architecture and lively street scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing modern skyscrapers and busy markets, which provide interesting details and contrast.

提案: Проблемы с повтором и грамматикой: студент снова повторил вопрос и использует неточное выражение «another sphere of life» и «they have own culture». Нужно дать прямой ответ, убрать повторы, улучшить грамматические конструкции и добавить конкретику. Рекомендуется использовать связки (because, for example, also) и конкретные примеры мест или культурных особенностей.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and histories to explore. For example, I like photographing historic streets in Europe and colorful festivals in Asia, which give me new perspectives and unique subjects.

× Do you like taking pictures of different youths?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

The student used 'youths' (young people) instead of 'views' (scenery). This is a word choice error rather than a grammatical rule in the provided list; however it most closely affects sentence meaning. Suggestion: replace incorrect noun with the intended one and check vocabulary meaning before answering.

× I think I prefer more urban areas because it's more, umm, bigger.

✓ I think I prefer urban areas because they are bigger.

The student used 'it's' (it is) to refer to 'urban areas' (plural), causing a subject-pronoun and verb agreement problem with third person singular. Also 'more bigger' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'bigger' alone is correct. Suggestion: use the plural pronoun 'they' with plural noun and avoid combining 'more' with comparative adjectives like 'bigger'.

× Of course I prefer other countries because other countries, it's literally another sphere of life.

✓ Of course I prefer other countries because they are literally a different sphere of life.

The phrase 'other countries, it's' uses the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'other countries' (plural), causing pronoun agreement error. Also 'another sphere of life' is acceptable but 'a different sphere of life' sounds more natural here. Suggestion: use 'they are' to refer to plural noun and adjust noun phrase for naturalness.

× They have own culture, they have own history, so it's more interest.

✓ They have their own culture and history, so it's more interesting.

Missing possessive pronoun: 'have own culture' should be 'have their own culture'. Also 'it's' referring to 'other countries' (plural) is incorrect—better to keep 'it's' as 'it is' referring to the experience, or rephrase. 'More interest' is incorrect adjective form; use 'more interesting' to describe something that causes interest. Suggestion: add 'their' for possession, combine clauses with 'and', and use the adjective 'interesting' instead of the noun 'interest'.