Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a short topic sentence that directly answers, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid one-word answers. For example, say whether you dislike or like photographing views and explain why (e.g., lack of interest, not confident with camera, or prefer other hobbies).

例: Not really. I don't enjoy taking pictures of views because I'm not confident with a camera and prefer spending time sketching instead. For instance, when I travel I usually sketch landmarks rather than photographing them because it helps me remember details.

提案: Provide a clear preference and support it with reasons and a brief comparison. Use linking words like "because" or "however" to make the answer coherent. Avoid saying you don't know; speculate or express mixed feelings if truly undecided.

例: I prefer rural views because they are usually quieter and more natural, with open fields and trees that I find relaxing. However, I also appreciate urban views for their architecture and lively atmosphere when I'm interested in city life.

提案: Answer directly about preference (own country, other countries, or both) and give specific reasons. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "also") and one or two supporting details or an example to make the response informative.

例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultural scenes that I can't find at home. For example, I loved the coastal cliffs I saw while traveling abroad, which were quite different from the beaches near my city.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

The sentence 'No, I don't.' is a correct short negative response and does not contain a definite article error. Keep as is.

× I don't know

✓ I'm not sure.

'I don't know' is grammatically correct but sounds abrupt in this context; 'I'm not sure' is a more natural response to a preference question. This change improves register and clarity without altering tense.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

The sentence 'No, I don't.' is an acceptable negative response to the question and does not require correction. Keep as is.