Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms and more natural phrasing (e.g., “I enjoy taking photos of different views”).

例: I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me remember places and moods. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines to capture the light and atmosphere.

提案: Answer the question directly (choose urban or rural), then explain why with a specific reason and a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like “and other areas.”

例: I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because there are quieter landscapes and unique natural details. For instance, I like photographing old farms and winding country lanes which show authentic local life.

提案: Use a complete, natural sentence to state your preference and give a specific reason or example with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “for example”). Avoid awkward word order like “other country view.”

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often have different architecture and landscapes I haven’t seen before. For example, I loved photographing the colorful markets and ancient temples when I visited another country.

× Yes, I like pick the picture.

✓ Yes, I like to pick pictures. OR Yes, I like picking pictures.

This sentence uses an incorrect verb form after 'like'. In English, verbs after 'like' should be either the infinitive with to (to pick) or the gerund (picking). Also 'the picture' is unnatural here; use plural 'pictures' to match the general activity. Suggestion: choose 'I like to pick pictures' or 'I like picking pictures' depending on emphasis (habit vs preference).

× Yes, I prefer to take pictures and other areas.

✓ Yes, I prefer to take pictures in other areas. OR Yes, I prefer taking pictures in other areas.

The original sentence misplaces 'and' and lacks a preposition to link 'take pictures' with the location. After 'prefer' you can use the infinitive with to or the gerund; both are correct. Add the preposition 'in' before 'other areas' to indicate location. Also 'other areas' should clearly refer to locations (urban/rural), so 'in other areas' is appropriate.

× Other country view is very beautiful.

✓ The view in other countries is very beautiful. OR Views in other countries are very beautiful.

This sentence has article and noun form problems. 'Other country view' is not a correct noun phrase in English. Use 'the view in other countries' (singular view concept) or plural 'views in other countries'. Adding 'the' and using 'in' clarifies the relationship. Also ensure singular/plural agreement between article and noun: 'the view' (singular) or 'views' (plural).