Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve doğru gramerle verilmelidir. Kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kullanın, ardından 1-2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Fiil zamanlarını düzeltin (past simple) ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Örneğin bisikleti nasıl kullandığınızdan, ne zaman öğrendiğinizden veya neden sevdiğinizden kısaca bahsedin. Bağlaçlar (because, when, so) kullanarak cümlelerinizi bağlayın.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike when I was about seven, and I loved riding it because it made me feel independent. I practised every afternoon with my older brother, so I became quite confident by the time I was nine.

提案: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için tek bir net görüş cümlesi kurun, ardından 1-2 destekleyici neden verin. Dil bilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (plural, articles) ve daha uygun kelime seçimi kullanın (people, drivers, respectful). Bağlaçlar (because, although, therefore) ile mantığı güçlendirin ve somut örnekler ekleyin (ör. trafik, altyapı).

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there is poor cycling infrastructure and drivers often ignore cyclists. For example, most roads lack bike lanes, so cycling feels unsafe, and as a result many people prefer to use cars or public transport.

× Yes I did. I love ride a bike and I had a small bike when I was child and I love love it my.

✓ Yes, I did. I loved riding a bike. I had a small bike when I was a child and I loved it.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past tense 'loved' to match 'did' and 'had'. 'Love ride' is ungrammatical: the verb 'love' followed by another verb requires the -ing form ('loving riding' is rare) or to say 'loved riding'. Also 'when I was child' misses the article 'a'. 'I love love it my' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'I loved it'. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently, use the gerund after 'love' when describing activities (loved riding), and include articles where needed.

× I think bikes are not popular in my country because we don't have a good roads for bikes and the peoples are so rude and and not respectful for bicycle drivers.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country because we don't have good roads for bikes and people are so rude and not respectful to bicycle riders.

Problems: 'we don't have a good roads' mixes plural 'roads' with 'a' — remove the article or use singular. 'the peoples' is incorrect; use 'people' (uncountable) not 'peoples' (means ethnic groups). Repetition 'and and' is an error. 'not respectful for bicycle drivers' should be 'not respectful to bicycle riders' or 'toward bicycle riders'. Maintain present tense 'think' and 'don't have' consistently. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, use correct noun forms, and use 'respectful to' or 'respectful toward'.