Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “did had” is incorrect; use “did have” or simply “I had”). Use a linking word if you add another clause.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small toy bike that my mother gave me for my fifth birthday, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood.

提案: Give a direct, complete sentence that answers the question and add one or two specific supporting details with a linking word (e.g., because, for example, especially). Avoid one-word responses and be precise about who uses bikes and why.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities, because many people use them for short commutes and exercise; for example, you can see cyclists on bike lanes during rush hour.

× Yes, I did had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence incorrectly uses the auxiliary 'did' with the past tense main verb 'had'. In simple past affirmative sentences, do-support is not used; use the past tense verb alone. Use 'I had' instead of 'I did had'. Suggestion: form simple past statements as 'subject + past verb' (e.g., 'I had', 'She went').

× A lot of people do.

✓ Yes, a lot of people do.

The brief reply 'A lot of people do.' lacks the confirmatory context expected after the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. While not strictly ungrammatical, it is better to include a marker such as 'Yes' to clearly answer the question. Suggestion: add a short confirmation word for clarity, e.g., 'Yes, a lot of people do.'