Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences. For example, use past tense consistently and mention when or how you used the bike.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to school and around my neighborhood, so it helped me become more independent.

提案: Improve grammar and expand with a specific reason or example. Begin with a direct answer, then use a linking word (for example, because, since, or so) to add a precise supporting detail. Use plural/singular agreement and correct verb forms.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For example, many people ride bikes for short commutes and exercise, and cities have developed bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Yes, I had a bike when I am child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present tense 'am'. This is a tense consistency error (Present tense issue). When referring to a past time ('when I was a child') use the past tense of 'to be' ('was'). Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past narratives by using past tense forms such as 'was' for 'to be'.

× Yes, it's very popular in China.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China.

The subject refers to 'bikes' (plural) but the sentence uses 'it's' (it is) which is singular. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Replace the singular pronoun and verb with a plural form 'they are' to match the plural noun 'bikes'.

× There are many people ride bikes everywhere.

✓ Many people ride bikes everywhere.

The sentence incorrectly combines an existential 'There are' construction with a following clause lacking a relative or auxiliary verb, causing a sentence structure error. Use either 'There are many people who ride bikes everywhere' or simply 'Many people ride bikes everywhere.' Suggestion: include 'who' after 'people' if keeping 'There are', or remove 'There are' and start with 'Many people' for a clearer sentence.