Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần chú ý phát âm và cấu trúc câu cơ bản. Trả lời nên trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, dùng thì quá khứ cho trải nghiệm trong quá khứ, và cung cấp vài chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: ai tặng, dùng để làm gì, có thích hay không). Tránh hỏi lại hoặc lẫn lộn từ (như 'buy' thay vì 'bike').

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I used it to ride to my friend's house and around the neighborhood. I remember practicing every afternoon until I could ride without falling.

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, chú ý phát âm và từ vựng (bike, popular). Sử dụng linking words để giải thích lý do (because, however, for example) và nêu ví dụ cụ thể về tình huống hoặc số đông sử dụng.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns and among students, because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to school or the local market, although in big cities cars and motorbikes are still more common.

× Did you have a buy? When do you service?

✓ Did you have a bike? When did you use it?

The student used 'buy' instead of 'bike', which is a vocabulary error; however the structure 'Did you have a buy?' misuses a noun and is treated here as incorrect pronoun/word choice and sentence structure. Also 'When do you service?' is ungrammatical for past context. The question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'did' and 'use' to ask when the student used the bike. Suggestion: replace incorrect word with 'bike' and match tense to past ('Did you have...?' and 'When did you use it?'). Note: Explanation provided in English as requested.

× Do you think buy a popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student omitted the correct noun form and plural agreement. 'buy' is a verb; the sentence needs the noun 'bikes' and the verb 'are' for present simple question about general popularity. Also use plural 'bikes' to refer generally. Suggestion: use 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' ensuring subject-verb agreement and correct noun form. Note: Explanation provided in English as requested.