Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan bentuk lampau karena pertanyaannya tentang masa lalu, berikan kalimat topik yang jelas lalu tambahkan 1–2 detail pendukung singkat menggunakan kata penghubung. Contoh fokus: kapan kamu memiliki sepeda, siapa yang memberikannya, atau bagaimana perasaanmu. Hindari jawaban satu kata.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about six, which my parents bought for me. It was my favorite toy and I practiced riding it every weekend with my older brother.

提案: Kalimat mengandung tata bahasa yang keliru (jumlah: 'bicycle' → 'bicycles') dan struktur agak panjang tanpa penghubung yang tepat. Gunakan bentuk jamak, perbaiki tense konsistensi, dan tambahkan detail spesifik serta kata penghubung untuk koherensi (mis. 'because', 'for example', 'also').

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, when I was about eight I often saw children and adults riding bikes to school or the market, and there are many bike lanes in some cities.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the response should use past tense. 'Have' is present-tense and also incomplete here; the correct short answer for 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is 'Yes, I did.' Use the auxiliary 'did' to form past simple short answers. Suggestion: Use past simple short answer 'Yes, I did' or full sentence 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes, I think bicycle are popular in my country because when I was about 8 I saw all children use bicycle.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because when I was about eight I saw all the children using bicycles.

There are multiple issues matching the allowed list: plural vs singular (use 'bicycles' not 'bicycle' when speaking generally), subject-verb agreement (use 'are' with plural 'bicycles' — 'bicycle are' was wrong because 'bicycle' was singular), and verb form/structure in the second clause. Also the phrase 'all children use bicycle' is incorrect: use 'all the children using bicycles' or 'all the children used bicycles' to match past time. Here, keep present-tense general statement 'I think bicycles are popular' and describe past observation with past continuous or past simple: 'I saw all the children using bicycles' or 'I saw all the children use bicycles' is awkward; better: 'I saw all the children using bicycles.' Suggestion: Use plural 'bicycles', include 'the' for 'all the children', and use appropriate verb form 'using' to describe what you observed.