Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: أجبت على سؤال الماضي بصيغة الحاضر وهذا خطأ زمني كبير. استخدم زمن الماضي عند التحدث عن طفولتك، وأجب مباشرة وبجملة موضوعية واحدة ثم أضف تفاصيل قصيرة تدعم الإجابة. تجنّب إعادة صيغة السؤال، واذكر مثلاً متى وكيف كنت تستخدم الدراجة.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park, which helped me stay active and make friends.

提案: أجبت بطرح نفس السؤال بدل الإجابة، ولم تُقدّم رأياً أو تفاصيل. عندما يُسأل عن الرأي، ابدأ بجملة رأي واضحة ثم قدّم سببين موجزين يدعمان رأيك مع رابط منطقي بينهما.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and there are more bike lanes now to make cycling safer.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used present simple 'Do you have' together with the past time phrase 'when you were a child', which is a tense mismatch. Use simple past 'Did you have' to match the past context. Suggestion: match the verb tense to time indicators; use 'did' + base verb for past questions. Grammar problem type and ID: 5:Past tense issue

× Do you think bicycles are common in your country?

✓ Do you think bicycles are common in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately to ask about a general state. Suggestion: no change needed; 'bicycles' and 'are common' correctly match the present-tense question. Grammar problem type and ID:6:Present tense issue