Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법과 자연스러운 시제 사용을 개선하세요. 현재 문장에는 중복된 조동사와 잘못된 시제가 있습니다. 간단하고 정확한 과거 시제를 사용하고, 주제를 명확히 하는 주제문과 한두 개의 구체적 세부사항으로 답변을 확장하세요. 예를 들어 언제, 어떤 자전거였는지, 자전거로 무엇을 했는지 등을 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every weekend to visit friends.

提案: 표현을 더 자연스럽고 구체적으로 만드세요. 단수·복수와 관사 사용을 고치고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어를 사용해 이유와 예를 명확히 제시하면 답변이 논리적으로 들립니다. 예를 들어 공유 자전거의 접근성이나 사용 사례를 언급하세요.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because public bike-sharing systems are widely available. For instance, many people use shared bikes to commute short distances or run errands, especially in busy city centers.

× Yes, I have a had a bike when I was younger.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was younger.

The sentence mixes present perfect ('have') with past simple ('had') incorrectly. The correct tense for a past possession that is finished is the simple past: 'I had a bike when I was younger.' Suggestion: remove the extra 'have' and use only 'had' to match the past time expression 'when I was younger.'

× Yes, I think it's popular because we have a share bikes in public.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular because we have shared bikes in public.

There are multiple issues: 'it' refers to a singular subject but 'bikes' is plural, so use 'they're' (they are). 'Share bikes' is incorrect collocation; the correct term is 'shared bikes' (adjective form) or 'bike-sharing services.' Also use the plural verb agreement with plural subject. Suggestion: use 'they're popular' to agree with plural 'bikes' and 'shared bikes' to describe bikes available for public use.