Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical and vocabulary errors. Aim to state a clear topic sentence, use correct past tense, and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, say you had a bike, when you got it, where you used it, and why you liked it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I often rode it in the park near my house. I enjoyed cycling because it gave me freedom and a chance to play with my friends.

提案: Your answer has vocabulary mistakes and unclear statements. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, for instance). Correct grammar: use 'are' and 'have' properly. Keep it concise and relevant.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children. For example, many families buy bicycles for their kids, and children often ride them to the park to play with friends or walk pets. This is partly because cycling is affordable and good exercise.

× Yes, I have a buy when I was a child I like to.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; I liked it.

The student mixes present tense 'have' and 'like' with the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense for actions or states in the past: 'had' (not 'have') and 'liked' (not 'like'). Also 'buy' is a spelling error and should be 'bike'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events and check spelling.

× By a bike in park.

✓ I used to ride a bike in the park.

This fragment lacks a proper verb and article. 'By' is incorrect; likely intended 'ride' or 'buy'. Also 'in park' needs the definite article 'the'. Using 'I used to ride' expresses a habitual past action. Suggestion: include a subject and finite verb and use articles correctly: 'in the park'.

× Yes, I think BAI is very popular for children in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular with children in my country.

'BAI' appears to be a misspelling of 'bike(s)'. Also use 'popular with' rather than 'popular for' when referring to people. Ensure noun is plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. Suggestion: correct spelling and use 'popular with children'.

× Many shouldn't has their own bike and they like to go to the park with their pet.

✓ Many don't have their own bikes, and they like to go to the park with their pets.

'Many' requires plural noun and plural verb form: use 'don't have' instead of 'shouldn't has'. 'Shouldn't has' is ungrammatical: modal 'should' requires base verb form ('have') but context calls for simple negative present 'don't have'. Also pluralize 'bike' and 'pet' to match 'many'. Suggestion: use 'Many don't have their own bikes' or 'Many shouldn't have their own bikes' depending on intended meaning; here 'don't have' fits better.