Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and naturalness: use past simple consistently and make the answer concise with a clear topic sentence. Add a brief supporting detail or reason. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding details.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or went with friends who rode their bikes. As a result, I learned to be independent early on.

提案: Make the answer more fluent and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and use linking words. Correct tense and remove awkward phrasing. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. This is because many cities have bike-friendly roads and extensive bike lanes, so people often use bicycles for short commutes and errands. Consequently, cycling is becoming a common and convenient mode of transport in urban areas.

× I do not have a bike when I was a child, but my friend has one.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child, but my friend had one.

Mixed tense error: the clause 'when I was a child' is past time, so the verb should be past tense. Also maintain parallel tense in the second clause: 'my friend had one.' Use 'did not have' for negative past instead of 'do not have.' Suggestion: Use past simple for events in the past and keep verbs in the same time frame.

× I do think that bikes are popular in my country because we have roads here that are very bike friendly and people are using it as a mode of transportation since.

✓ I do think that bikes are popular in my country because we have roads here that are very bike-friendly and people have been using them as a mode of transportation for a long time.

Multiple issues: 'do think' is acceptable but 'people are using it' is awkward and incorrect reference: 'people' is plural so use 'them' for bikes (pronoun agreement) and 'bike-friendly' needs a hyphen; the present perfect progressive 'have been using' fits because usage started in the past and continues now. The word 'since' was used without a reference point; replace with 'for a long time' or 'for many years' or provide a specific time. Suggestion: Use present perfect continuous to show ongoing action and ensure pronoun agrees with plural noun.

× Our hometown has a lot of bike lanes.

✓ Our hometown has a lot of bike lanes.

This sentence is correct grammatically. It uses the preposition 'has' appropriately and 'a lot of' correctly modifies plural noun 'bike lanes.' No change needed.