Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and does not follow the Basic Structure or Natural & Effective rules. Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add 1–2 supporting details (specifics such as when, why, or a short memory). Keep it natural and under five sentences. Use linking words if you add more than one detail.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from about age six to ten, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. Because my parents wanted me to exercise and learn balance, I practiced with training wheels at first and then rode without them by myself within a few weeks.

提案: The response is unclear and shows misunderstanding of the question. First, answer the question directly with a topic sentence (Yes/No/Partly). Then give specific supporting details and a reason or example. Use linking words (for example, because, however) to make your answer coherent. Keep it natural and within five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and parking is difficult. However, cycling is more common among younger people and in areas with dedicated bike lanes.

× What is the capital of popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's reply does not answer the examiner's question and contains incorrect sentence structure and word order ('capital of popular' is not grammatical). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correct response should mirror the examiner's question by addressing whether bikes are popular. Suggestion: listen to the question, identify the key verb and subject ('are bikes popular'), and respond with the same structure (e.g., 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' or a direct answer like 'Yes, bikes are very popular' or 'No, they are not very popular').