Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use correct tense and give a brief, natural reply with a short explanation. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one supporting detail (reason or memory). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid redundancy.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment, so there wasn’t space to store one. Instead, I usually walked to school or took public transport with my parents.

提案: Make the answer more specific and provide a clear reason with an example. Use accurate grammar (subject-verb agreement) and a linking phrase to connect ideas. Explain how bikes are used (transport, delivery, jobs) rather than vague phrases like “and so on.”

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and efficient way to travel in crowded cities. For example, many people use bikes for food delivery and bike-hailing services, which creates job opportunities for young workers.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple negative ('don't have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past events (I didn't have a bike).

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because it helps people to find job opportunities like Yango in Ripe and so on.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they help people find job opportunities like Yango in Ripe and so on.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun referring back to it should be plural ('they'), and the verb should match ('help' not 'helps'). Also remove the unnecessary 'to' after 'help' when followed by a bare infinitive: 'help people find'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number and adjust verb forms after 'help'.