Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how you used it, or a memory). Keep it natural, use linking words if you add details, and limit to up to five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used it to ride to the park every afternoon. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to ride slowly and built my confidence, and by age nine I could ride long distances with friends.

提案: Again, you repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. To improve, start with a direct opinion (yes/no/partly), then give specific reasons or examples (e.g., for commuting, sport, or leisure), and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to structure your answer. Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and help avoid traffic, and there is also a growing interest in cycling for exercise and recreation.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The noun 'child' needs the definite article 'a' in this context because we refer to a period of being a child (singular countable noun). Use 'a child' to indicate the general state of childhood. Suggestion: include the article before singular countable nouns (e.g., 'when I was a child'). Grammar_problem_type_id:22

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Bikes' as a plural noun fits 'are popular' and the question form is correct. No change needed. Grammar_problem_type_id:6