Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Anda hanya mengulangi pertanyaan pemeriksa dan tidak memberikan jawaban. Untuk meningkatkan, jawab langsung dengan kalimat topik (ya/tidak atau keterangan singkat), lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik (mis. kapan Anda memilikinya, siapa yang memberinya, atau bagaimana Anda menggunakannya). Gunakan kata hubung jika perlu untuk keterpaduan (mis. "and", "because", "so"). Batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 5 kalimat.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it to visit friends in the neighborhood. It helped me learn balance and gave me a lot of freedom, so I spent most afternoons practicing in the park.

提案: Anda mengulangi pertanyaan lagi tanpa menjawab. Untuk memperbaiki, mulailah dengan kalimat topik yang jelas (mis. "Yes, they are" atau "No, not so much"), lalu berikan alasan spesifik atau contoh (mis. penggunaan untuk olahraga, transportasi, atau budaya bersepeda) dan satu atau dua detail tambahan. Gunakan kata penghubung seperti "because", "however", atau "for example" untuk membuat jawaban koheren.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with heavy traffic because many people find them faster for short trips. For example, students and office workers often cycle to save on transport costs and to avoid traffic jams.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original is a repetition of the examiner's question rather than an answer. This is a sentence structure error because the response lacks a verb phrase asserting possession. Use past simple 'had' to answer a past-time question and include a subject to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: Start with 'Yes,' or 'No,' then use 'I had' or 'I didn't have' followed by the object.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original repeats the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure/presence error in tense usage; to respond, use present simple 'I think' to express current opinion and keep 'are popular' for the state. Suggestion: Begin with 'Yes,' or 'No,' then use 'I think...' or 'I don't think...' followed by the clause describing popularity.