Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and sentence structure, speak more naturally and directly, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike as a child.”), then give a short reason or example using linking words (e.g., “so I used to borrow one from a friend.”). Keep the answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I used to borrow one from a friend whenever I wanted to ride, so I still got to practice sometimes. I remember saving money to buy my own later.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity, use a clear topic sentence and provide a specific reason and brief consequence. Replace vague words with precise vocabulary (e.g., “proper bike lanes” or “safe cycling infrastructure”). Use a linking word like “because” or “so” to connect reason and result.

例: Not really. In my country, cycling isn’t very common because we don’t have proper bike lanes or safe roads for cyclists, so many people prefer to use cars or public transport instead.

× No, I have not a bike when I were a child, but I borrowed to my friend if I want to ride a bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I borrowed one from my friend when I wanted to ride a bike.

IDs: 6 (Present tense issue), 5 (Past tense issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns). The sentence mixes present and past forms incorrectly: 'have not' is present but the time reference is past, so use past simple 'did not have'. 'were' with 'I' is incorrect; use 'was'. 'borrowed to my friend' is wrong preposition and object: use 'borrowed one from my friend'. 'if I want' should match past time reference -> 'when I wanted'. Suggestions: Use consistent past tense for past situations (did not have, was, wanted), use correct preposition 'from' after 'borrowed', and use 'one' to replace the noun 'a bike' already mentioned for naturalness.

× Not really because we don't have a proper St. for a ride by ride a bike.

✓ Not really, because we don't have proper streets for riding a bike.

IDs: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Problems: 'St.' is an abbreviation and should be written 'streets' in this context; 'for a ride by ride a bike' is ungrammatical. Use the gerund 'riding' after 'for' to express purpose: 'for riding a bike'. Also remove the extra article 'a' before 'ride' and use plural 'streets' to match general meaning. Suggestion: Say 'proper streets for riding a bike' or 'proper bike lanes for cycling' depending on intended meaning.