Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ неясный и несвязный. Постройте предложение, прямо отвечая на вопрос (да/нет), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталях: кто дал велосипед, когда вы его получили, как часто вы на нём катались. Используйте простую, но правильную грамматику и логические связки (например, "and", "so", "because"). Избегайте бессмысленных словосочетаний и поддерживайте длину ответа до 3 предложений.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day after school. It helped me feel independent and explore my neighborhood.

提案: Ответ частично понятен, но содержит ошибки в структуре и не завершён. Начните с прямого мнения (Yes/No/It depends), затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример или сравнение. Используйте связки (for example, however, in contrast) и завершите мысль. Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений и избегайте расплывчатых выражений типа "very vastly".

例: I think bikes are quite popular, but it depends on the area. In city centers many people use bicycles because they are convenient and faster than cars in traffic. However, in rural areas cars are more common because distances are longer and roads are less suitable for cycling.

× It's about the speed card that table rebound come.

✓ I don't understand the question; could you repeat it?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and does not form a coherent response to the question. It contains unrelated words ('speed card', 'table', 'rebound') and lacks clear subject-verb relationships. Suggestion: if the student did not understand the examiner, use a polite clarification such as 'I don't understand the question; could you repeat it?' or answer directly about having a bike in childhood (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'). This provides a clear subject and verb and fits the context.

× It is really good question because the result would range within the city very vastly.

✓ That's a very good question because bicycle popularity varies a lot across the city.

The original sentence has awkward word choice and incorrect collocations ('result would range within the city very vastly'). Use 'varies a lot' or 'differs widely' to express variation. Also start with a natural phrase like 'That's a very good question'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and proper adverb placement: 'varies a lot' places the adverb after the verb.

× In the center of the cities and bikes are considered as very convenient way of transport.

✓ In city centers, bikes are considered a very convenient way of transport.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an unnecessary 'and' after 'cities'. Use the phrase 'city centers' and place 'bikes are considered' together. Remove 'as' after 'considered' and use the article 'a' before 'very convenient way'. Also 'way of transport' is acceptable but 'mode of transport' is more natural: 'a very convenient mode of transport.'

× However, in the.

✓ However, in rural areas they are less common.

The original fragment is incomplete and lacks a noun and verb. Complete the idea by specifying the contrasting area and a verb phrase, for example 'in rural areas they are less common.' This provides a clear subject and verb and completes the comparison begun with 'However.'